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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn 
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What are the pretty words that need to be said? Tell me, so that I may say them Where is the Magical phrase that makes it all better? The incantation, I have not found Whose is the language you understand best? Teach it to me, I wish to be fluent Why is all that I've said, just a faint echo that you don't recall hearing? |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I think you just said them....very well indeed... |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
wranx...You said it mighty good here. Words from your heart is all that need to be said, nothing more truer can be said...Paul |
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majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
unheard and unrequited. nice bit, the simplicity speaks volumes. -majnu |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Ed, I also believe that you said everything you need to say right here.....from the heart. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I heard you... and you said all the Magical phrases perfectly. Some...just do not know how to listen. ~Hugs~ ~Love, like magic, depends on believing~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Ed, I think that person probably needs a hearing aid--for you speak the language very well! Linda |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Wranx poignant words as usual. I sometimes question the value of my words but then I found this forum. I am learning to stop questioning myself and instead learning the beauty of communicating and sharing thoughts with those of like mind. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Hmm.. I think this is something I wish my husband had asked me a long time ago.  Liked this.. perhaps it made me think a little too much. ~~I Love You~~ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Perhaps it was just the poem? Nobody ever asked ME before-- (till lately--blush) so maybe she is the same? Beautiful m'yeti.  |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
pretty words... reminds me of one I did some time ago about illusions... honest questions..hopefully followed by honest answers |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Nothing speaks louder than the quiet truth. Exceptional write. ThisDiamond |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
I love you. Pretty Honest |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Communication of feelings, desires and needs does help, doesn't it?? But then men and women tend to speak in different tongues to each other...we need tofind a neutral vocabulary. ...believe what your heart feels... |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
I don't respond as often as I might but I read most of your posts. Most times, I relate. Each time, I am impressed with your ability to communicate so accurately, with seeming little effort. (That's a good thing) |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
in between the lines, thats where youll find me........ this is real on target......... |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
in between the lines...... thats where youll find me.......... the truth in the unspoken, isnt it so? on target stuff here |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
I can think of three. A sad, sweet poem. Corinne |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
sometimes we already are saying the right words........they just aren't listening....... I love the way you 'say' things... |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Ouch. |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
umm, all those responses and not a single person used the cliche' :"actions speak louder than words"? well, guess i just did. this poem was written some time ago, probably about some feeling tucked away in a hatbox with other intangible notions. but, being that they are still here on the blue pages, i read and wanted to tell you that believe it or not...Silence speaks volumes. if silence can be held without blush, or looking away, or nervous impulses...if silence can be shared so comfortbly as to not notice the absense of sound....then you dont need words...they are redundant. and i talk too much..ironic eh? |
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