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inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
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Ohio

0 posted 2002-11-19 09:03 PM





summertime trees
undressing,
shedding leaves
at my feet,
drizzling down softly
a sweet lullaby,a sigh
on the whims of the wind,
circle around me
crowning me
the leaf goddess
in this golden halo,
dispersing off
in a flash of color
like butterflies
vanishing too soon
from summer nights,
flying off
on their journey
as i stand bare again
by the empty trees,
watching
it all
fade
away.............


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Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2002-11-19 09:07 PM






(smiles) Oh my gosh, this is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I know this feeling too of missing the spring and summer yet there is still much beauty in the winter cold, this is a wonderful debut, I LOVE IT!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much, and be sure to check your E-mail for a very special greeting from all of us here at Passions just for you! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton



"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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garysgirl
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2 posted 2002-11-19 09:35 PM


WELCOME  TO  PASSIONS  IN  POETRY

inkedgoddess,
I really hope that you like it here as much
as I have for the last two months. I'm sure
you will because everyone here is very warm and
friendly, with a great big loving heart.
I really enjoyed reading your poem. It was
really beautiful. I hope to read much more
of your work.


"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (11-19-2002 09:36 PM).]

Sunshine
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3 posted 2002-11-19 09:42 PM



What a lovely journey into the ever after of a Fall...
Welcome to Passions!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
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Michigan, USA
4 posted 2002-11-20 01:00 PM


Welcome leaf goddess...A wonderful presentation for your first write.
Look forward to sharing the blue with you.
ThisDiamond

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
5 posted 2002-11-20 10:31 PM



thanks for the nice thoughts...........

and poetic visions

Kristine
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since 2002-10-30
Posts 92
Mahal Kita!!!
6 posted 2002-11-21 06:16 AM


enjoyed... lovely poem.
thanks for sharing.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
7 posted 2002-11-21 08:46 AM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!
I much enjoyed your first post!
I shall look forward to seeing more of your work.
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~Love, like magic, depends on believing~

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