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garysgirl
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0 posted 2002-11-19 04:05 PM


With feet in the sand
We lie down on the blanket
While watching the stars

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (11-20-2002 10:06 AM).]

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1 posted 2002-11-19 04:08 PM


Yay! I love this, Ethel! keep it up
aloha and hugs, Cher

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

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2 posted 2002-11-19 04:13 PM


i love this..haiku is so fun isnt it?..

inside every soul there is music...let the music play

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3 posted 2002-11-19 04:20 PM


make sure the tise doesn't get you ( smiling)

sounds like a nice place to be...

ThisDiamond
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4 posted 2002-11-19 04:27 PM


sweet little write!
ThisDiamond

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5 posted 2002-11-19 04:56 PM


HMMM... Somehow Ethel, I doubt you see many stars once the blanket is unfolded!!  Just teasing....very well written!!
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6 posted 2002-11-19 04:58 PM


A very sweet little Haiku...
well done, Ethel
~ loving chipmunk hugs

Lyra

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"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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7 posted 2002-11-19 06:18 PM


Cheryl......
Thank you for reading and replying. I'm glad that you like them.


Valerie......
Yeah, these little haiku's really are fun !I like them. Thanks for replying.

Capt......
I'll be real careful!! HeeHee!!
Yeah, the beaches and water around here are beautiful.
Thanks for your reply.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

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8 posted 2002-11-19 06:30 PM


Kathleen....
Thanks for reading and for your
sweet reply. I appreciate it.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

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9 posted 2002-11-19 06:53 PM


Scorpio....
Shame on you!!!  HaHa!!
Thanks for reading and for your reply. I'm
glad you liked it.

Lyra....
Thanks for reading and replying. I appreciate it, little Chippymunk.


"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (11-19-2002 06:54 PM).]

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10 posted 2002-11-19 06:57 PM


simple pleasures in life
so sweetly written about

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11 posted 2002-11-19 07:19 PM


Lovely.Just proof that you don't have to write a book to describe a tree.

paladin

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12 posted 2002-11-19 07:23 PM


Lie under the blanket was the key here, and
the show was awesome....thanx Ethel!

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13 posted 2002-11-19 07:48 PM


Well, you really have outdone yourself with these. They are so good; I just love them.

Hugs and Brava ... Marti

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14 posted 2002-11-19 08:06 PM




Ethel,

So good to see you writing these.
And, seeing you continually branching out in other forms of writing. You do it well.

Hugs,
Pat

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15 posted 2002-11-19 08:30 PM


cool poem for the one yuh love
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16 posted 2002-11-19 08:41 PM


inkedgoddess....
Thanks very much for reading and for your
reply. I really appreciate your comments.

Paladin.....
Thank you for your reply. I'm really glad
that you liked this little haiku.

Barry.....
Now! Now! HeeHee!!......I said, "We lie down
on the blanket", not "under" it. HaHa!!
Thanks for reading and for your reply.

Marti.....
Thank you so much. I really appreciate you
saying that.

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17 posted 2002-11-19 08:45 PM


Pat.......
Thank you so much for reading  my little poem.
I really do appreciate your comments, too.

Walt.....
Thanks for reading my poem and for your
reply. I'm glad that you liked it.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

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18 posted 2002-11-19 09:55 PM




(smiles) These are sooooooooo romantic, sweet friend, your gorgeous love for Gary is so heavenly and I knopw he will forever be blessed and happily will show you loves destiny! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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19 posted 2002-11-19 10:02 PM


i want to put this next to a picture of half moon bay on a clear night.

-majnu
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20 posted 2002-11-19 10:05 PM


Noah,
Thanks so much for reading my little poem.
Your replies are always so sweet. I really appreciate you, Noah. You are a good friend.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

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21 posted 2002-11-19 10:07 PM


Majnu, thank you very much for reading and replying. I appreciate your comment.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

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22 posted 2002-11-20 09:44 AM


very, very fine senyru

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

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23 posted 2002-11-20 09:46 AM


You are really getting very good at writing these short Japanese verses!

~ may you continue to make such memorable memories!

Linda

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24 posted 2002-11-20 09:52 AM


Virginia,
Thanks so much for reading and replying to my little Japanese verse. I appreciate it.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

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25 posted 2002-11-20 09:55 AM


Linda, thank you so much. I love the little verses that you and Marti, and the rest here, write so well, that I decided to try it. I got the "seies" idea from Mark and others who write the continuing things.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

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