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GOlDsparklESS
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0 posted 2002-11-19 02:36 PM



Even
After
All this time
The sun never says to the earth,


"You owe
Me."


Look,
This love...
It lights the
Whole
Sky.

© Copyright 2002 Manisha Narang - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-11-19 02:38 PM


All love should be without strings...like the sun it should warm freely

...believe what your heart feels...

GOlDsparklESS
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2 posted 2002-11-19 02:57 PM


I love you. I love you. I love you. I love you. I love you. I love you. I love you. I love you. I love you I love you I love you I love I love I love I love I love I love I love I love I love I love I love I love love love love love love love love LOVE LOVE LOVE....
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3 posted 2002-11-19 02:58 PM



I LOVE this!  

Janet Marie
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4 posted 2002-11-19 04:28 PM


Do you truly know how very cool this poem is?
I LOVE this inspire ... it glows!!




No one has ever shown me how to see the world the way I see it now ...
and I never saw blue like that before.

~Tom Kimmel~

[This message has been edited by Janet Marie (11-19-2002 04:28 PM).]

ThisDiamond
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5 posted 2002-11-19 04:30 PM



Excellent! ThisDiamond

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6 posted 2002-11-19 10:26 PM




(smiles) Oh Manisha, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, always embrace the skies for love is always shining in the heavens to you! (sigh This is beautiful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Manisha, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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7 posted 2002-11-24 11:20 AM


this poem shines so true.

after all, are we not all made of sunlight?

I have sent you nothing but angels, and I have placed nothing but miracles before you.

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8 posted 2002-11-24 11:28 AM


Such a miracle...our life giving orb that
fills our day with the light that warms
and brings all of earth to that which it
is.....never asking...always giving..

Thanx for this,  very beautiful...

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