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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2002-11-19 03:22 AM


Silence  (All I've Got)

You know
what really hurts?
I will tell you...
I've done some research
and as a result I know
that silence really hurts.
With it comes a realization
that she can live without you
for if she couldn't surely
she would be calling you
to share that valuable
piece of information.
But she's not.
And now...
all I've got
is silence.

JamesLee
November18
2002

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2002-11-19 04:11 AM


I'm sorry...this is so sad...I sometimes think a certain someone feels this way about me, but don't know for sure. I wish he would tell me.
Janet Marie
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2 posted 2002-11-19 10:45 AM


SBJ ...the honesty of your rhymes always touch me.

No one has ever shown me how to see the world the way I see it now ...
and I never saw blue like that before.

~Tom Kimmel~

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3 posted 2002-11-19 10:48 AM


silence can also heal...

good write.. sad but well done.


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4 posted 2002-11-19 10:53 AM


AAWWW, James........I hope you will hear her voice soon, above the loud silence. It does seem loud in our heads at times, doesn't it??

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

RSWells
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5 posted 2002-11-19 11:38 AM


Silence is deafening, it's void fills with pain. Sorry and ....I know.
ThisDiamond
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6 posted 2002-11-19 11:49 AM


Silence can mean many things...your heart knows the answers...
All prayers for the positive. ThisDiamond

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7 posted 2002-12-14 01:59 PM


back to the top!
inkedgoddess
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8 posted 2002-12-14 04:19 PM


yep,silence screams in this case,
keep the faith

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9 posted 2002-12-14 04:35 PM


yes, James, silence can be quite painful, but it's often in silence that we heal.  Take care!

The stars will shine when I am gone,
the earth will turn on as before,
the gulls, still race along the shore,
the morning star, still kiss the dawn

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