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brian sites
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0 posted 2002-11-19 01:08 AM


you absorb
and are wrung
and I would be your pail

catching every
precious
drop

look
into
your
water

and see

my
   eyes

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1 posted 2002-11-19 01:10 AM


Seems a liquid sort of night, eh?

(yes, it would)

Ed

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2 posted 2002-11-19 01:14 AM


Ooh... this just wraps itself around me, Brian...
A wonderful write
~ hugs from a soggy chipmunk

Lyra

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3 posted 2002-11-19 01:14 AM


glug glug?



sigh

brian sites
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4 posted 2002-11-19 01:17 AM


yes Ed
sigh
a bad one down south
King Knucklehead
frankensteins about
thanks

brian sites
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5 posted 2002-11-19 01:20 AM


thank you Lyradiamondchip
love you lady

Wren?
yes
and
yes.....

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6 posted 2002-11-19 01:26 AM


Brian, I felt like I was looking over into a pail of water and seeing a reflection of myself. It was good.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

brian sites
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7 posted 2002-11-19 01:31 AM


thank you Ethel
and I'm glad it was good

Brian

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8 posted 2002-11-19 08:51 AM



Such a great poem!

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9 posted 2002-11-19 08:56 AM


Wow... this says a lot.

Deb

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10 posted 2002-11-19 10:45 AM


I would be your pail.

liked this one Brian...

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11 posted 2002-11-19 11:29 AM


Ah, a safety net for the sensitive. Lord knows they need one. Enjoyed
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12 posted 2002-11-19 12:46 PM


Reminds me of a little something by William Carlos Williams. Loved it, bri.
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