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Suetang
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0 posted 2002-11-18 07:09 PM



Picture by Josephine Wall

* * * *

Lay me softly in the meadow
And please stay with me awhile
Shower me with your sweet kisses
And let me trace around your smile

Roll me over in the clover
As we frolic in the sun
Let me give myself to you
For it's my heart you have won

Run with me through the valley
Beneath the sky so blue
My days are always perfect
When I spend them loving you

Whisper to me sweet nothings
Become the keeper of my heart
Two souls have been united
And will never ever part

Our two hearts share a dream
'tho we sing with just one voice
I love you without effort
I love you simply by choice


I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

© Copyright 2002 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
garysgirl
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1 posted 2002-11-18 07:24 PM


"Our two hearts share a dream
'tho we sing with just one voice
I love you without effort
I love you simply by choice"


Sue, I love the whole poem, but this ending stood out to me....so true for couples who are really in love.
I love the way you put the pictures in with your poems. I'll be glad when I learn to do that. It really adds to the words.
Thanks so much for sharing with us.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

garysgirl
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2 posted 2002-11-18 07:25 PM


OOPS...forgot to keep it.
scorpio
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3 posted 2002-11-18 07:48 PM


"I love simply by choice."

Simply a wonderful choice of phrasing...I enjoyed this poem, Sue.

NewEnglandlazurlu
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4 posted 2002-11-18 07:57 PM


Sue, I honestly believe you are the queen of romantic love poems. What a gem this is.

'... Our two hearts share a dream
'tho we sing with just one voice
I love you without effort
I love you simply by choice ...'

Words to melt the coolest heart.

The picture is fascinating. I don't remember seeing this one. I love the details in it.  Hugs, Marti


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5 posted 2002-11-18 07:59 PM


Sue...you are the queen of romance!
This is one awesome write sweet poetess.
~Hugs~

~Love, like magic, depends on believing~

NewEnglandlazurlu
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6 posted 2002-11-18 08:00 PM


Sue, I honestly believe you are the queen of romantic love poems. What a gem this is.

'... Our two hearts share a dream
'tho we sing with just one voice
I love you without effort
I love you simply by choice ...'

Words to melt the coolest heart.

The picture is fascinating. I don't remember seeing this one. I love the details in it.  Hugs, Marti


Madame Chipmunk
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7 posted 2002-11-18 11:29 PM


This is so free and light, Sue...
I love the carefree feel of it
~ hugs from a loving chipmunk

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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8 posted 2002-11-18 11:29 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is sooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, and to love by free-will is the happiest feeling of all! (kiss onn cheek) This is delightful, sweet friend, yay, God Bless You, may true love always sing in your heart, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Goodknight
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9 posted 2002-11-19 09:45 AM


Sue - you weave words of deep romance and love - thanks so for all you write - Paul
regards2you
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10 posted 2002-11-19 10:09 AM




This poem is simply  ~precious~!
Warm Regards, Pat


..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

TwoHeartsOnePen
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11 posted 2002-11-19 01:32 PM


This sounds close to a love story that I was in the middle of telling. *sigh* Its time to uncap our pen again I think. I enjoyed this. It inspires me to begin again.
Lovely...

Love is patient, indeed. It endures the distance when it seems we cannot endure it ourselves.

TwoHeartsOnePen
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12 posted 2002-11-19 02:23 PM


Pardon me for peeking again, but I begin to think I recognized the painting, and when I noticed the name on the bottom of the painting, I realized I have seen it before. Josephine Wall has some breathtaking artwork, and you have done a wonderful job with this.

Love is patient, indeed. It endures the distance when it seems we cannot endure it ourselves.

JamesMichael
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13 posted 2002-11-20 02:35 AM


An absolute pleasure to read...James
Paul Wilson
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14 posted 2002-11-20 04:28 AM


Sue~ Another beautiful touching poem from you. This flows so smooth, like a summer breeze...Paul
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