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bsquirrel
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0 posted 2002-11-18 04:14 PM


You map well
the dimensions of the floor
and the snow gone sky.

© Copyright 2002 MPC - All Rights Reserved
Eliza
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1 posted 2002-11-18 04:17 PM



Navigational lessons
help me stay
right side up

wranx
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2 posted 2002-11-18 04:30 PM


The Great Sargasso
reflects me blue
in boundless cloud


Ed

Thought I'd go with it too.

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Gaia
3 posted 2002-11-18 04:38 PM


Mind's eye
sees yonder sky,
the blueness of you.

Earth Angel
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4 posted 2002-11-18 04:42 PM



Infinite Wisdom
Orchestrates all things
Be they great or small

[This message has been edited by Earth Angel (11-18-2002 04:42 PM).]

Madame Chipmunk
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5 posted 2002-11-18 11:22 PM


snowflakes drift
on quiet nights
forever let them be
~ fluffy rodent hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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6 posted 2002-11-19 12:02 PM


Winter skies beckon
With yellow wings of justice
Supposed hopes shine



Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

brian sites
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7 posted 2002-11-19 12:30 PM


the sky reflects
the eye's aspect
refracted from the I

bsquirrel
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8 posted 2002-11-19 12:17 PM


Wow I had
no idea
this poem would garner such a response and a long last line.

Thank you.

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