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moonflower
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magical land of make-believe

0 posted 2002-11-18 09:52 AM


one tiny snowflake


one tiny snowflake
falling softly down,
just one little snowflake
floating earthbound

exquisite and beautiful
in glistening white,
tumbling ever so gently
on its downwardly flight

only one,but then another,
then yet still more,
magically the sky is filled..
visually transformed

as swirling flakes
drift slowly down,
the world is frosted,
without a sound

dancing down throughout
the night,they
transform the earth
into a vision of white

piling and drifting
into magical shapes
gracefully changing the
face of natures landscape

inside every soul there is music...let the music play

© Copyright 2002 valarie - All Rights Reserved
Lady In White
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1 posted 2002-11-18 10:00 AM



Seasonly, we are almost in that fantasy land of snowflakes and magic...just close your eyes, and the season is upon us.

Welcome to Passions!  Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting!

write with grace, all others lose face;
"Jo was very tall, thin, ... and reminded one of a colt..." LMA

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
2 posted 2002-11-18 10:05 AM


Welcome to Passions, moonflower! Your poetry is as graceful as your name!

A lovely piece for your poetic debut! If you love to read and write poetry, you've come to the right place!

Earth Angel

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3 posted 2002-11-18 10:26 AM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!
Much enjoyed your opening post!
I will be watching for more of your work!
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2002-11-18 11:03 AM




(smiles) Oh my gosh, I love snowflakes and snow and we get so much of it here in Colorado, this beautiful poem touched like a snowflake on a childs tongue, this is a gorgeous debut, I love it!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet Valarie, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much, and be sure to check your E-mail for a special greeting from all of us here at Passions just for you! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Valarie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (11-18-2002 11:04 AM).]

scorpio
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5 posted 2002-11-18 11:06 AM


Welcome to Passions....You'll love it here!!

...believe what your heart feels...

Janet Marie
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6 posted 2002-11-18 11:31 AM


Welcome to poetry land moonflower...
your imagery is lovely and your words are laced as delicately as the snowflakes you write of.
So nice to have you here with us
jm

No one has ever shown me how to see the world the way I see it now ...
and I never saw blue like that before.

~Tom Kimmel~

moonflower
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magical land of make-believe
7 posted 2002-11-18 01:10 PM


hey thanks everybody..ya'll have made me feel so warm and fuzzy inside because of your warm welcomes..i know i am gonna love it here..you are all so very kind..thank you, thank you once again..

inside every soul there is music...let the music play

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Gaia
8 posted 2002-11-18 01:36 PM


Welcome. Your poem reads like snowflakes, falling gently upon the page.
Aenimal
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9 posted 2002-11-18 01:45 PM


I love how this poem flows, beautiful rythm and imagery.

as a tribute to it I wouldn't dare sunder this new landscape by shovelling it, I'll let my brother do it. lol

garysgirl
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10 posted 2002-11-18 02:20 PM


WELCOME  TO  PASSIONS  IN  POETRY
Valerie....
I love your pen name and I love your poem.
It's so sweet and innocent sounding. I hope that you like it here at PIP as much as I
have these last couple of months. I'm sure
you will, because everybody here is very
warm and loving.......just like a great
big "family of friends".
Thanks for sharing your poem and I look
forward to more of your work.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

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11 posted 2002-11-18 04:09 PM


Welcome to Passions moonflower!! Lovely first post. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

BloomingRose
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12 posted 2002-11-18 04:45 PM


WELCOME TO PASSION'S...

A great start you have with this lovely poem!

Deb

moonflower
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magical land of make-believe
13 posted 2002-11-18 05:48 PM


awww..im speechless...you all have just made my day so happy! thanks to each one of you so much..im soooo glad y'all liked my poem..i already love it here!..thanks again...

inside every soul there is music...let the music play

Madame Chipmunk
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14 posted 2002-11-19 02:41 PM


Welcome to Passions, Moonflower...
I love your graceful poem... and hope to see more from you
~ welcoming chipmunk hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

moonflower
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Posts 37
magical land of make-believe
15 posted 2002-11-19 03:50 PM


thank you madame chipmunk for your very kind words about my poem..and for the warm words of welcome..

inside every soul there is music...let the music play

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