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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2002-11-18 07:20 AM


Expression

Of fantasies my stock and trade
In wily wiles and dream cascade
Where pendulums swing steady rhyme
And disregard the tick of time.

I rule this place of fantasy
And stock it full of ecstasy
From moments gone of past and lost
Where beauty lies and has no cost.

I leave the weary of my day
Sail a ship through sandman’s way
Find a shoal where flies the dove
And spend the nights on Isles of love.

I build my castles in the air
Dispense the grace I would not dare.
I touch upon infinity
Or close in it’s vicinity.

It does not offer indent peace
But helps me with the present lease.



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1 posted 2002-11-18 07:56 AM


Sy... such places do help with the present lease... nicely done as usual...

I enjoyed

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2 posted 2002-11-18 08:08 AM


Where pendulums swing steady rhyme
And disregard the tick of time.

======================
where can I get me a clock like this??
maybe it will help me with my meter *L*


I build my castles in the air
Dispense the grace I would not dare.
I touch upon infinity
Or close in it's vicinity.

It does not offer indent peace
But helps me with the present lease.

===============================

ahh Stinkylove that closing couplet is worth its weight in poetic gold!!
and of course...will be me waaay cool lines of the day...as is the poet!!



and one for Randy *L*

No one has ever shown me how to see the world the way I see it now ...
and I never saw blue like that before.

~Tom Kimmel~

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3 posted 2002-11-18 08:11 AM




(smiles) Yay!!! Because no government can own your clouds and the castles you build upon them and the many smiles you paint on many faces! (big hugggssssss) This is lovely, sweet friend, always follow your heart and express the colors within, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2002-11-18 08:23 AM


Cpat Hair
Thank you for the read and kind words.

JM,
Regardless of the age, sometimes I feel adopted by you and feel privileged that you did. That you took me in like a Randy dragon
that needed a little love and haven't stopped since. Why I will not question. But can only say thank you for your beautiful friendship. WWRS

Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2002-11-18 08:25 AM


Noah,
Thank you for all your beautiful replies.

regards2you
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6 posted 2002-11-18 08:26 AM


Good Morning Sy,

Your expressions of your daydreams are better than my daydreams...  

Liked this a lot. Thanks.

Warm Regards, Pat  



..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"
  

[This message has been edited by regards2you (11-18-2002 09:26 AM).]

Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2002-11-18 08:31 AM


Pat  
Thank you and I wish you the best of dreams.

Janet Marie
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8 posted 2002-11-18 08:38 AM


The question is... how could I not?????

Who could resist those Stinky-winkie charms and Randy's dandy?

"Not I" said the moth! *L*

Sybabes...ya gave a moth Tinkerbell wings and turned her into a butterfly in your rhymes...it is I that thanks you for the friendship and smiles across the miles.

love ya and that darlin dragon  




No one has ever shown me how to see the world the way I see it now ...
and I never saw blue like that before.

~Tom Kimmel~

[This message has been edited by Janet Marie (11-18-2002 08:39 AM).]

Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 2002-11-18 08:47 AM


JM,

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10 posted 2002-11-18 09:05 AM


"I leave the weary of my day
Sail a ship through sandman’s way
Find a shoal where flies the dove
And spend the nights on Isles of love."


What beautiful thoughts to start the day!
And Janet Marie is SO right...
who could resist you...or Randy!
~Hugs & Smiles this bright crisp morn~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

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11 posted 2002-11-18 10:12 AM


I rule this place of fantasy
And stock it full of ecstasy

You certainly do, and we are blessed that you share with us this wonder. hugs, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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12 posted 2002-11-18 10:14 AM


Sy

"I rule this place of fantasy
And stock it full of ecstasy
From moments gone of past and lost
Where beauty lies and has no cost."

The places in your mind
are all one of a kind
the place you stop to rest
is wonder at its best


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13 posted 2002-11-18 10:17 AM


I rule this place of fantasy
And stock it full of ecstasy

~*~

yes you do
yes you do
and where would we be
without you
without you?

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14 posted 2002-11-18 10:36 AM


"I rule this place of fantasy"

(somebody is reading my mind this morning!)

but HAIL Sy!


Seymour Tabin
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15 posted 2002-11-18 12:11 PM


Enchantress
Thank you sweet hugs back and have a good one.

Chris,
My pleasure, hugs back.

Martie
You wander pretty good yourself. LOL


Lady
You are my sunshine.

serenity
You do well with fantasy.



Madame Chipmunk
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16 posted 2002-11-19 12:48 PM


I build my castles in the air
Dispense the grace I would not dare
I touch upon infinity
or close in it's vicinity

I just love those castles in the air, Sy...
A beautiful poem
~ loving chipmunk hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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17 posted 2002-11-19 12:53 PM



**sying**@you and your poetry, Sir.
simply lovely

"two hearts will build the foundation for one point of light
a duet done with passion"

excerpt from "I Love You"

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18 posted 2002-11-19 12:58 PM


Mr. Seymour, as always, I love your elegant words. Thank you for sharing.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

Seymour Tabin
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19 posted 2002-11-19 07:31 AM


Lyra,
Thank you so much for the read and comment.


Temptress
Sighing at your reply.

garysgirl
Thank you for reading and replying.

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