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EagleScorpion
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since 2000-03-08

Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever

0 posted 2002-11-18 03:15 AM

We all love each other so very, very much, you know.

So go on and cry, and then SMILE as you do so!
HAVE NO SHAME, FOR YOUR PAIN IS UNDONE, AND ONE DAY THE DREAMS WILL COME!

Dont care what they say or what they're thinkin' of,
let's all take a look in the mirror of love.

Here I stand on the edge of forever, the sun crests the edge of this world,

the trees stretch thier arms and yawn with the wind as the morning glory's petals unfurl,

The wandering wind whispers in this ear of mine,
as I sail through this birth of new light,

know you not what's near, before tommorow drives away this night?

eternities inside eternities, space and time,
lets bring it into sight.

know you not the coming rapture?
know you not the love you are?
know you not the things we've done together among all of these stars?

We all love each other so very, very much, you know.

Beneath the shroud... proclaimed aloud...
Under a glowing moon...

Swept away... in tears

I have sent you nothing but angels, and I have placed nothing but miracles before you.

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

1 posted 2002-11-18 08:20 AM

Dont care what they say or what they're thinkin' of,
let's all take a look in the mirror of love.

Here I stand on the edge of forever, the sun crests the edge of this world,

the trees stretch thier arms and yawn with the wind as the morning glory's petals unfurl,

The wandering wind whispers in this ear of mine,
as I sail through this birth of new light,

know you not what's near, before tommorow drives away this night?

eternities inside eternities, space and time,
lets bring it into sight.
===================================

this reads like a song or mantra!!

Love the alliterations, assonance and imagery....and the positive message of this ones harmonies. Very cool poet sir!!
and? that quite a critique quote LOL

No one has ever shown me how to see the world the way I see it now ...
and I never saw blue like that before.

~Tom Kimmel~

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2002-11-18 08:29 AM

EagleScorpion
I'll second JM on this one.

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

3 posted 2002-11-18 10:01 AM

EagleScorpion,

I don't need to tell you how good this is. But, I am gonna anyway, and also I am giving you one huge hug....

I love this poem.

"take a look in the mirror of love"

"the trees stretch their arms and yawn with the wind"

Oh, my....what a great poet you are!

Thank you so much for sharing this with us. Enjoyed.

Warm Regards,
Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2002-11-18 10:11 AM

..."Here I stand on the edge of forever, the sun crests the edge of this world..."

--breathtaking and heartstopping--full of meaning and possibilities.....

Wonderfully written
Enjoyed emensely!

EA

EagleScorpion
Senior Member

since 2000-03-08

Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever

5 posted 2002-11-18 12:12 PM

Thank you for your replies, guys.

Janet - I am honored to have been read by a poet of your esteem and caliber.

Seymour - I second that for you!! ;-)

Pat- I see you truly enjoyed this work. I am glad for it.

Earth Angel - Thank you too my little angel.

Now what i did here was take ideas from previous separate writings and put them together. This is by no means the final product. I think this poem is a diamond in the rough yet, because it wants to tell you something and have you know it and cherish it.. The message here is very important for all of us.

I have sent you nothing but angels, and I have placed nothing but miracles before you.

EagleScorpion
Senior Member

since 2000-03-08

Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever

6 posted 2002-11-18 12:12 PM

Thank you for your replies, guys.

Janet - I am honored to have been read by a poet of your esteem and caliber.

Seymour - I second that for you!! ;-)

Pat- I see you truly enjoyed this work. I am glad for it.

Earth Angel - Thank you too my little angel.

Now what i did here was take ideas from previous separate writings and put them together. This is by no means the final product. I think this poem is a diamond in the rough yet, because it wants to tell you something and have you know it and cherish it.. The message here is very important for all of us.

I have sent you nothing but angels, and I have placed nothing but miracles before you.

GOlDsparklESS
Member

since 2001-12-13

Posts 428
central nj

7 posted 2002-11-18 04:54 PM

Our tears mingle with hope so that we may know the meaning of flight...

diamond in the rough, indeed.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

8 posted 2002-11-18 05:19 PM

EagleScorpion...
You said in your reply that this isn't "the final product" yet. Goodness gracious, I already can feel the deep emotions and feelings from your heart.
Thank you so much for sharing this.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

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