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Drexler_McStyles Member
since 2002-11-18
Posts 195Venice, Ca |
felt ribbons lying on the grave marker strictly regulate my double standards sworn to sobriety toast it with a shotgun shot glass negligee satin touch virgin skin lying on the wet paint organized mayhem, calculated clutter set aside luckily no one pays as much mind as I to the dirt beneath my fingerprints to the cowardice behind the wisp of my smile the absence of echoes, of voices fill the canyons inside I would silence the heavens below if the thefts in my heart saw sunlight draped over the skylight if an utterance of relief were a memoir and not a aspiration there are splits on the rings of a tree a place where the nail is driven into the coffin there is a core where things grow from instead of being eaten at I hope in my journeys wayward I find such a place |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
o but you will.. my good friend.. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh my gosh, you have such incredible talent, yes, all things grow from somewhere and I know with your willpower and enthusiasm you will go far beyond the grave into the splendor of life! (big hugggssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is fabulous, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Drexler, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
I enjoyed this poem a great deal. I like these phrases: ~organized mayhem~ ~calculated clutter~ Though always a quest, some have found that core....acceptance is everything in it's revelation... Thank you so much for this poem. Opens my mind to so many possiblilites... ~WELCOME TO PASSIONS~ I look forward to reading more of your work. Warm Regards, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. "Desiderata" [This message has been edited by regards2you (11-18-2002 09:22 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I liked the wording of this and the message...I hope I find a place like that too |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
**************************************** I would silence the heavens below if the thefts in my heart saw sunlight draped over the skylight if an utterance of relief were a memoir and not a aspiration **************************************** The ultimate sand script, Steven. I'll sip a glass to that. |
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