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JediRaver
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0 posted 2002-11-17 08:52 PM


Conceived in all your splendor...whispering the words.
Of sinner's hate, and vexing vengeance... corrupting all you've heard.
You rise upon a blood red dawn...centuries of sentinels
are yours to take command...with the force of power burning you, to take them by the hand.
You are my enemy...an adversary, a bain upon my heart.
Seeking perfect chaos by stealing what thou art.
And in the end I will prevail in crushing your dark reign...
so the just will come from every mountain, forest, lake, or plain.

Conceived by birth in royalty...myriads of your mind...
With wisdom, love and such compassion...flowing from your kind.
You hold the force of wisdom true...the people of your kingdom vast look up to you.
Your beauty only checked by the knowledge you possess...
a legend in a lineage...so grateful its success.
You are my guide...my endeavor, my one and only love...
Praying, ever showing, like a light upon the dove.
But now I must protect your kingdom from that which one could make, a wasteland of pure evil, pain and prejudice; all for pleasure's sake.

Conceived upon the forest realm...destinies in dreams,
Of justice, peace, and loyalty...emancipate my soul in beams. I hold the force of courage dear...to protect this land from evil hands...today and yesteryear.
I will travel places far and long in such a dire quest...To make sure all is well and safe...put goodness to the test. I am the protector...their warrior who fights for peace...To harmonize the relics three, of power, wisdom, and courage...
I will give all for thee.


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1 posted 2002-11-17 11:55 PM




BRAVO!!! Oh my gosh, you speak with such wisdom, sweet friend, I love this, yes, hold onto this wisdom and courage and your demons will be conquered always by Him! (big hugggssssss) This is outstanding, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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2 posted 2002-11-18 05:25 PM


GOD BLESS.
garysgirl
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3 posted 2002-11-18 05:54 PM


JediRaver, this is really full of wisdom. I enjoyed reading it. I like stories of warriors.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

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