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Amature2
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0 posted 2002-11-17 08:51 PM



You and the Stars


I've searched all over the sky
Looking for the perfect star
A star I would call by your name
For it would be a beautiful as you
Millions of miles away
Billions of stars to choose from
Endless nights awake
And all I had to do was look in your eyes
For everything in the universe
Everything that the stars are made of
Are also a part of you



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Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2002-11-17 11:59 PM




(smiles) This is lovely, sweet friend, I love it, your words are always so beautifully romantic! (sigh) may the stars always shine happily for you, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You nhave such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

moonflower
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2 posted 2002-11-18 12:21 PM


how lovely this is..i truly enjoyed it..
Amature2
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3 posted 2002-11-18 06:14 AM


Thank You Mistletoe Angel.

Thank You Moonflower, glad you like it.

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2002-11-19 04:03 AM


Enjoyed...James
Kristine
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Mahal Kita!!!
5 posted 2002-11-19 04:11 AM


Wow. truly beautiful
scorpio
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right...there
6 posted 2002-11-19 01:34 PM


A beautiful romantic write...twinkling in it's heartfelt words..

...believe what your heart feels...

inkedgoddess
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7 posted 2002-11-19 07:00 PM




so heartfelt and true,
isn't it.......
how we see in our lovers eyes
the stars, the moon,

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