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eyesplus2
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0 posted 2002-11-17 05:30 AM



A Dream

Spoken only in the heart........
realized only in restful slumber...

A love expressed.....A heart desired...
A look felt.....A touched tasted.....

A hero for all......All for a hero....
A lady to rescue...Her favours to gain...

The dreamer never gives up on dreaming...


The dream never ends...........

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ethome
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1 posted 2002-11-17 06:20 AM


It is so true the dream never ends.....Very nicely done!!
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2 posted 2002-11-17 09:10 AM


Aren't dreams wonderful to have? I think so, and I loved reading about them in your poem. Thanks.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

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3 posted 2002-11-17 08:36 PM



The dream never ends...

nor does the dreamer ever stop,
and always, always
listens to the muse...
with a ready quill
and a willing heart...

scorpio
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4 posted 2002-11-17 08:41 PM


Nicely written...I enjoyed this very much...
Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2002-11-17 08:42 PM


eyesplus2
Dreams are the other side of the coin. enjoyed

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6 posted 2002-11-17 08:44 PM


Superb,  I too enjoy the thoughts of dreams,
where anything is possible and can be done
or experienced in the snap of a finger...only
far faster...  thanx for this...

Very nicely stated..

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7 posted 2002-11-17 08:50 PM




(smiles) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, and may you always follow your dreams and find true bliss within! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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