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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2002-11-16 06:37 PM


(For you, Joanna, my love! )




(Art by Kim Morrison)

God Put A Halo Around Your Heart
By: Noah Eaton
11/16/02

O' Joanna
Fairest, sweetest love
How the swallows chortle for you
Divaricating the heavens for you
Because my love for you is infinite
I wrote for you
From the charity in my hand
A red velvet dithyramb
To wear as a wedding band
So wherever you go you feel my kiss

Hold me, lift me from this aestivation
Fly on my wind, I'll be your aviation
With your smile, you clear my concentration
When I close my eyes and feel your warm kiss
It's like Braille no angel can recognize
That no god can metabolize
My sweet Joanna...

I would dive from mountains
I would swim entire oceans for you
No lagniappe I offer can explain how much my love is true
My lungs are like helium balloons
Waiting to burst so I can fall into your arms
Your eyes are painted green with the cream of the moon
Loves truth is written in your magnanimity
Grace fills all your methodology
Only God can explain your topography
God, it's great to be alive, swimming with you in the stars

My love for you is beyond catholic
Every little song you sing is magic
Only blinking my eyes to your sighs is tragic
I feel like a homing pigeon
Who goes weak and vertiginous
To your soft moist cherry kiss
My sweet Joanna...

God put a halo around your heart
You've got me lost in your eyes
Your gorgeous green eyes
Your sweet innocent sheeps eyes
God put a halo around your heart
You've got me lost in your eyes
Your gorgeous green eyes
Your sweet innocent sheeps eyes

O' Joanna
Fairest, sweetest love
I will always be your love dove
Let me feel your heart beat to mine
Love...

(Sorry I have posted very little recently, for those of you concerned about me, everything is fine, I have been working heavily on guitar to sharpen my musical skills for songwriting and in result have put writing aside just for a few days! )



"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira



[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (11-17-2002 01:41 PM).]

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Duncan
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1 posted 2002-11-16 06:58 PM


'God, it's great to be alive, swimming with you in the stars'

It is a blast, isn't it?  Good to read you again, Noah.

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2 posted 2002-11-16 07:35 PM


Noah, a precious poem once again and sweet pic too!! hugs, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

BloomingRose
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3 posted 2002-11-16 08:25 PM


Noah you have such a tender heart, and a soulful way with words.

Hugs,
Deb

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4 posted 2002-11-16 08:36 PM


Ohhhh so romanticthe verve of this exellent love poem! She is a fortunate woman to hold your love. best wishes to you both sweet poet.
aloha with warm thoughts and hugs, Cher

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5 posted 2002-11-16 08:42 PM


Noah, I sure was glad to see you posted here when I just came back "home to pages of blue".
Your sweet, tender, compassionate heart just shines through in these loving words to your Joanna. Such love you have for her.
We all miss you here, Noah, and will be looking for more of your work, soon.
Thanks for sharing this beautiful love poem with us.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

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6 posted 2002-11-16 11:25 PM


I hope Joanna knows how lucky she is to have a sweet guy like you!

K, now put a song on a wave file and give us all the link!

Cor

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7 posted 2002-11-17 12:04 PM


Very beautiful, Noah...
You have the soul of a pure romantic
~ loving chipmunk hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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8 posted 2002-11-17 01:08 PM


This is so beautiful Noah. I love it.

Cold hands means a warm heart

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9 posted 2002-11-17 01:31 PM


As the consumate artistic soul, it is understandable that you have to put one of your talents on the back burner at times, so that you may hone the skills of another! I'm relieved to know that it was your music that had kept you away and that you are well and kicking!
Lovely love poem and lovely picture--almost looks like it could be Joanna when she was a little girl!

~ warms angel hugs to you dear Noah!

Linda

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10 posted 2002-11-18 09:00 PM


enjoyed
Miah
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11 posted 2002-11-18 10:23 PM


How lovely.  A Romantic heart to match a gentle soul.  Enjoyed!
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