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0 posted 2002-11-15 11:45 PM


True love is genuine
and forever kind
Love is a treasure,
when you can find
Worth more than jewels,
diamonds or pearls,
Or any other riches
in this world
Love is more precious
than silver or gold
Or other treasures
the world may unfold
Love is passion
it is warm
Heaven on earth
in each other's arms
When our lips touch
in a sweet kiss
Soft and tender
it's such bliss
When to soft music,
we dance real close
In feelings we have,
we tend to get lost
We're hand in hand,
strolling along
Down life's road
singing our song
We walk together,
and in our minds eye,
Towards a beautiful sunset,
in love, you and I
We're never to part,
with hearts bonded are we
Our love is a treasure,
forever destined to be


© Copyright 2002 Ethel GG Kent - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-11-15 11:48 PM


that's so cool that you have such positive things to say o yuh
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2 posted 2002-11-15 11:52 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is soooooooo beautifully breathtaking, sweet friend, what I dream of ever so much is taking my Joanna to a Shakira concert because she is both our favorite artist and kissing to the favorite songs of love she sings! Soon I'll re-post the poem dedicated to her! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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3 posted 2002-11-15 11:57 PM


Thank you, ~wayoutwalt~ for your really cool reply. I appreciate it.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

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4 posted 2002-11-16 12:02 PM


Hey, Noah....
I'll be so glad when yours and Joanna's dreams become realities. You two have a beautiful love story, too.

You know what? Gary and I have talked about how we would like to have our love story written for us. Maybe you could write a novel about yours and Joanna's love story. That would be neat, wouldn't it?

I'll be watching for the poem you were talking about, too.

Thanks, friend.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

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5 posted 2002-11-16 01:23 AM


The Maze

It is the
journey
for its own
sake
& your easy
smile that
helps me
forget
I dont know
where
we're going

~K

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6 posted 2002-11-16 01:36 AM


Hi ~K~....
Thanks for reading my poem and for your reply.
I like the poem you wrote. You're really good, you know.
Thanks.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

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7 posted 2002-11-16 09:03 AM


Yes Ethel! Love is indeed a treausure.
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8 posted 2002-11-16 09:09 AM


May the chest of your treasure remain full
and overflowing...for all time...

Very nicely done Ethel...

You both are blessed..

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9 posted 2002-11-16 09:28 AM




Yes, sweet lady, love is heaven on earth. (smiling)

Hugs to you and warm regards, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

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10 posted 2002-11-16 11:06 AM


Sue.......
thanks, sweet lady for reading my poem and for your reply

Barry......
thanks so much for reading my poem and for replying. Yes, we both feel very blessed.

Pat.......
sweet friend, I thank you very much for reading my poem and for your sweet reply.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (11-16-2002 11:07 AM).]

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11 posted 2002-11-16 01:43 PM


sounds loverly, Ethel....
Best of luck to both of you
~ loving chipmunk hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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12 posted 2002-11-16 02:05 PM


Ethel, your treasure chest flows over with the love you and Gary share.

Huggles, Marti

"I am not afraid of STORMS for I have learned how to sail my SHIP."
Louisa May Alcott



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13 posted 2002-11-16 03:09 PM


Sweet Chippymunk....
Thanks, loverly lady. I appreciate your reply.
BTW, I love those cute little "loving chipmunk hugs".


Marti......
Thank you sweet friend. Oh, I love your  "signature"....it's good when a person has "learned how to sail their ship".

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

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14 posted 2002-11-20 02:47 AM


Nice...James
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15 posted 2002-11-20 08:16 AM


Thank you, JamesMichael, for reading my poem and for your reply.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

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16 posted 2002-11-21 06:25 PM



garysgirl~
Such lovely thoughts you've expressed here.
Very beautifully penned.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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17 posted 2002-11-21 06:34 PM


Vicky, I really do thank you for reading my poem,
and for your sweet reply. I appreciate it very much.
I love your poetry. It is beautiful.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

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18 posted 2002-11-21 07:22 PM




though some become jaded about love, is
there any alternative, even with the hurt
that sometimes goes along with it..
sweetly expressed

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19 posted 2002-11-21 07:25 PM


yes, love is a treasure, almost as much as you, Ethel. I loved this poem.

Never be normal!

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20 posted 2002-11-21 07:54 PM


inkedgoddess, thank you so much for reading and for your nice reply. I appreciate it very much.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

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21 posted 2002-11-21 07:56 PM


Liz, thank you, friend. I really appreciate your sweet reply.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

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22 posted 2002-11-21 08:05 PM


Love is all around you, Ethel...you bring it here..

...believe what your heart feels...

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23 posted 2002-11-21 08:09 PM


Thank you, Scorpio, that was really sweet to say. I appreciate it very much.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

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