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Duncan
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0 posted 2002-11-15 10:25 PM



If I promise
not to hold you
to it, tomorrow

would you tell me
you love me
tonight?

© Copyright 2002 Duncan - All Rights Reserved
SEA
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with you
1 posted 2002-11-15 10:29 PM


oh Cowboy....
(((hugs)))

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2002-11-15 10:39 PM


Oh dang!!!

Midnitesun
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Gaia
3 posted 2002-11-15 11:08 PM


OK, if you insist.
Don't wake up too early.

garysgirl
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4 posted 2002-11-15 11:13 PM


Oh, Duncan, you sound so lonely!!!

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
5 posted 2002-11-15 11:34 PM



Now here you took
a line
and turned it
inside out...

RSWells
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6 posted 2002-11-15 11:36 PM


Geez, don't do that to yourself! (You couldn't keep such a promise could you?)
wayoutwalt
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7 posted 2002-11-15 11:56 PM


you might sprain something!!! i mean that in a good way? yuh yuh
Madame Chipmunk
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8 posted 2002-11-15 11:58 PM


Oh Duncan... this sounds like such desperation!
Well done, though! ~ loving chipmunk hugs

Lyra

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"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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9 posted 2002-11-15 11:58 PM


:

(sigh) Oh Duncan, my heart goes out to you, sweet friend, I send angel hugs of comfort your way in hope you feel better soon! (big hugggssssss) This is sadly heartfelt, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Duncan, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration
10 posted 2002-11-16 12:59 PM


smilin here bud, and understanding... i promise to keep reading if you keep writing.
~K
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11 posted 2002-11-16 01:18 AM


what thirst
does darkness quench
what are words
but a tangle in this
stolen kiss

~K

Krystopher Morris
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Ancient land called Chivalry
12 posted 2002-11-16 04:22 AM


Supremely Enjoyed.
passing shadows
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displaced
13 posted 2002-11-16 04:59 AM


I've thought this way a few times...thanks for putting it so eloquently!
catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
14 posted 2002-11-16 09:33 AM


I have thought this many times. Very well said.
Sandra

Janet Marie
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15 posted 2002-11-16 10:51 AM


Now how ya gonna ask a question like that in a place full of moths??


Its like sitting a cuddly puppy on the porch and saying "free to a good home"


SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown
16 posted 2002-11-16 02:03 PM


Awww! You sound so lonely here.
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
17 posted 2002-11-16 02:07 PM


Duncan
Well you could try, enjoyed.

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