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majnu

Senior Member

since 2002-10-13

Posts 1088
SF Bay Area

0 posted 2002-11-15 07:28 PM

(46)

  It has been long since snowflakes fell
  from my head. But Winter fast pushes
  down Fall, and once again the dark
  thunderheads gather in the lengthening
  Darkness.

(48)

  Oil in Water minute glass,
  Flip and fall drops of clour down;
  Red to orange, orange to yellow;
  Yellow to - no. Too long in the sun;
  Sad fate to fade - better spilt.

(50)

  The snow pile on the road,
  Movers and blowers matter not;
  Howling winds of thought blow more
  On towards whatever whenever
  Wherever the train goes.
  One solitary ray would melt all things
  but only darkness Darkness.

(51)

  Doubt of doubt creeps in now;
  Is the loneliness I percieve longing for The Presence? -
  I hope not, I turned from that path long ago.

-majnu
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Timid thoughts be not afraid. I am a Poet.

[This message has been edited by majnu (11-15-2002 07:29 PM).]

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2002-11-15 07:45 PM

In winter, seeds find repose and await the birth of spring...
In every species...there is rest until the returning. Strong thoughts here.
ThisDiamond

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2002-11-15 11:45 PM

"Is the loneliness I percieve longing for The Presence? -
I hope not, I turned from that path long ago."

Just a Q: Which/whose presence?

wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

3 posted 2002-11-15 11:49 PM

thought provoking o yuh i liked

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

4 posted 2002-11-16 12:25 PM

Majnu, I like your poetry. It all makes the reader really think.
Thanks for sharing your work.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

5 posted 2002-11-16 12:46 PM

Majnu... I think you describe Michigan quite well... although you seem to live in California...
This is a lovely poem

~ hugs from a Michigan rodent

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

majnu

Senior Member

since 2002-10-13

Posts 1088
SF Bay Area

6 posted 2002-11-16 01:09 PM

thank you all so much for reading my work, it is extrmeley pleasant to check your mail in the morning and find several messages saying that people have read and appreciated my work.

diamond, you are right save perhaps in the case of writers. during summer our hearts sing and we flit to and fro in the world in the throes of rapture but winter's storms often confine us indoors and the lighting and thunder at times strikes our minds to motion.

midnitesun, The Presence is The Presence, call it the divine, the infinite, God, whatever.

wayoutwalt, thanks i like poking minds.

garysgirl, thank you, i am glad you enjoyed it.

madame chipmunk, so my mind reminds of michigan eh? hehe.

-majnu
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Timid thoughts be not afraid. I am a Poet.

[This message has been edited by majnu (11-16-2002 01:10 PM).]

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