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0 posted 2002-11-15 11:52 AM


I   love   my  "True   Love"
And   all   of   my   family,  
Friends,  enemies,   too



"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  


[This message has been edited by garysgirl (11-15-2002 12:12 PM).]

© Copyright 2002 Ethel GG Kent - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-11-15 12:01 PM


Ethel, a Senryu or Haiku are developed on a 5-7-5 syllable count.

If your last line read "Friends, Enemies, too" you'd be on the mark!

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2 posted 2002-11-15 12:10 PM


Thanks, Sunshine. I'm changing it now.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

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3 posted 2002-11-15 12:13 PM



There y'go!

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4 posted 2002-11-15 12:26 PM


Thanks, sweet lady. I appreciate your help.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

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5 posted 2002-11-15 02:23 PM


To love ones enemies...now that takes a special kind of person
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6 posted 2002-11-15 03:20 PM




This angel sends you
Feathery hugs of friendship
From the clouds above



Yay!!! And we all love you too so much! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, you are a true angel, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!



Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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7 posted 2002-11-15 03:22 PM


hoot_owl_rn.......
Thank you for reading my poem and for your reply.
I really do love my enemies....I may not like their ways, but I love their souls. Besides, there could be some reason that they think they should be my enemy !?? Anyway, I personally think that everyone has some good in them. You just have to look harder to find it in some people than in others.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (11-15-2002 03:23 PM).]

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8 posted 2002-11-15 03:24 PM


Noah, thank you for your sweet reply. I like the little poem you did.
You are the "angel", dear friend.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

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9 posted 2002-11-15 03:26 PM


Hooray Ethel!!

Great job and I like it very much.

Huggles, Marti

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10 posted 2002-11-15 04:05 PM


Thanks, Marti. I guess I'm learning a little something, aren't I?

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

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11 posted 2002-11-15 04:52 PM


Ethel, how nice. You did this so well and yes, what a loving person you are.

Sometimes our enemies haven't known love of the kind of which you speak...straight from your soul. God Bless..

Warmly, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
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12 posted 2002-11-15 05:27 PM


Well, lookee here! You went and wrote a senryu---and with a very special message for us all!

~ loving hugs

Linda

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13 posted 2002-11-15 05:38 PM


Pat, thanks so much for reading my poem and for your heartfelt reply. I sure do appreciate your loving remarks. Thank you very much.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

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14 posted 2002-11-15 05:41 PM


Hey Linda. Yeah, I made an attempt to write one. I love the ones all of you do so well that I thought I'd try.
Thanks for your reply. I appreciate it very much.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

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