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Midnitesun
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0 posted 2002-11-15 02:10 AM


Geometrically speaking,
we lack congruence,
you and I.
Upon different points
we protest and cry,
not on the same plane
we precipitously fly.
But because we love music,
passionate poetry,
the intensity of colors
more than numbers,
we are in constant harmony,
and it all adds up
to pulsating notes
exploding
asymmetrically
in a near perfect
crescendo,
in an aural convergence,
minus needless innuendo.

So much for
Euclid and Pythagoras.
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© Copyright 2002 Kathleen Kacy Stafford - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-11-15 09:34 AM


I like this... especially the ending...


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2 posted 2002-11-15 09:34 AM



So much...
so.

Enjoying you...

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3 posted 2002-11-15 09:43 AM


Midnitesun
Well done, I enjoyed.

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4 posted 2002-11-15 09:46 AM


Kacy, oh yes..the  "constant harmony" is very good.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

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