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Writing Each Other Poetry
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Writing Each Other Poetry |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA 
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With all the world I want to share this loving poem I read My Love's the one who wrote it and I love what he said The name that he gave the poem is just simply "Fingertips" It brings so many feelings they can't even pass my lips I'd really like you to see it I'd post it if I could Only trouble is I don't know if I really should He says there's much he'd like to say but words won't reach his lips So would I let him do the talking with just his "fingertips" He goes into much detail of his message he'll convey With his fingertips and kisses he'll tell me what he has to say We know we're very lucky my dear sweet Love and I We write each other poetry with a loving sigh And found this love we've always wanted, so sensitive and sweet We love each other so deeply and are so happy we did meet For the rest of our lives we know together forever we'll be Loving, singing, smiling and writing each other poetry "Love makes the world go around" ~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~ [This message has been edited by garysgirl (11-16-2002 01:19 AM).] |
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Tammy Blessing Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 366PA |
Oh Ethel!! **sigh** I wish my love would write ME poetry!! You are really very lucky! I hope you shared this one with your love as well. I know I sure enjoyed you sharing it with me..even if it did make me a bit envyous! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Tammy, thanks for reading my poem and for your reply. We both feel very lucky. I really wanted to write more of his poem I was talking about in with this one, but it would have had to go to the "other" forum. HeeHee!! "Love makes the world go around" |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
This was a very touching poem which I enjoyed, I find it easier to write down my feelings than to express them, so your words found a place in my heart. I wish my partner would find the time and need to just read once or twice, she then might get to know the true me. Wonderful you have a person who loves all of you. Much enjoyed. Sincerely Rick |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
I used to write my girlfriends poetry in the 3rd grade....things like Mary had a little lamb but now the lamb is dead, now Mary takes the lamb to school between two slabs of bread. Then, when I got much older and wiser I wrote poetry to my ladies too, things like: Mary had a little lamb, but now the lamb is dead, forget about that sheepskinned thing, and get in Toerag's bed. (And, of course, my poetry didn't work any better back then-then it does now...) |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
lol at Toerag's reply, but your poem is sweet and I'm glad you didn't have to move to the other forum. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Rick, thanks for reading my poem and for your reply. I think one reason that Gary and I know each other so well is that we've had this long distance relationship for so long that we've written lots of letters and poems to each other. Through them we've told each other a lot of feelings inside. It is easier to write things down. I really hope that your partner starts reading youor poetry soon. It will make you lots closer, I think. "Love makes the world go around" |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Now, Mr. Toe, you know that you've wooed many a girl and then ladies by your sweet, loving poems.....now haven't you?? HeeHee!! "Love makes the world go around" |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thanks Kethry...I'm glad that I didn't have to move to the other forum, too. I don't know if I could write a poem and put that many "details" for everyone to see. Gary and I will just have to keep all those details between us. "Love makes the world go around" |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
That was lovely. How fortunate you are if you have such a wonderful love. Sandra |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Yay!!! Awwwwwwwww, this is soooooooo beautifully breathtaking, sweet friend, I LOVE IT!!! I hope soon Gary joins these boards too so you two lovebirds can both post gorgeous poetry for us all to read speaking of your true happiness, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sandra, thanks for reading my poem and for your reply. Yes, we feel very blessed to have found each other. "Love makes the world go around" |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you, Noah. Gary doesn't have a computer. If he had one, he would already have joined PIP, probably. He loves writing poetry, especially to me (just as I like to write poems to him). He is much more talented than I am, though. He can write poems in all different styles and about all different subjects. He also is a very talented artist. He can look at anything and draw it just the way it looks. And he also can draw anything from memory, too. He is good at making things, too. Well, I'd better hush before I sound like I'm boasting. I am really proud of him, though. Not only is he talented, sweet, compassionate, modest, and all those things....he's VERY good-looking, too. Yes, I'm very fortunate to have him. Okay, Noah, I'm gonna hush. (I sound like you talking about your Joanna, don't I??? Reckon it's love?? HeeHee!!) "Love makes the world go around" |
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~K Member
since 2002-10-19
Posts 104 |
I have yet to find a word as satisfying as the touch of love. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Such lovely words, Ethel... You and Gary are truly blessed to have found each other... All you are missing is a computer for him and you would have it all..... Christmas is coming, though... maybe Santa will bring him one  ~ loving hugs onlineLyra |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
that sounds like a great outlook.... keep up the cheer |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
So true ~K~...so true !! "Love makes the world go around" |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you, sweet Lyra. We feel really blessed to have found each other. It would be nice if Gary could get a computer, wouldn't it? Then he and I could write love duets together over the internet...(~~BIG smiles~~) Thanks, sweet Chippymunk. "Love makes the world go around" |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
~wayoutwalt~... Thank you for reading my poem and for your sweet reply. I appreciate it. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Kielo Senior Member
since 2002-02-11
Posts 1109 |
You're very lucky, and I'm sure the poem he wrote you was as wonderful as this one. Oh no... I'm becoming less and less hard. Diamonds are brittle, you know... Oh well. I'll feel better tomorrow.  Oh, and I enjoyed the poem!  Kielo According to statistics, a man eats a prune every twenty seconds. I don't know who this fellw is, but I know where to find him. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you, Kielo, for reading my poem. I really appreciate your kind remarks, too. They were really sweet. You always are kind, Kielo. Thanks, again. "Love makes the world go around" |
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