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Tammy Blessing
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0 posted 2002-11-15 01:58 AM



My heart aches
My soul cries out

Silence...

No arms enfold me
No emotion is shown me

Silence...

What happened to beauty?
What happened to love?
What greets me this night?

Silence...

The pain inside grows
The tears often flow

In silence...

I scream!!!
And it echos

In silence...

Why is that hearts
So bound by love's ties
Can greet each other with

Silence...

Where is the caress
Without the word spoken?
Where is the beginning
And the ending of

Silence...



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garysgirl
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1 posted 2002-11-15 02:30 AM


Tammy, I really like the way you wrote this. I like the way your words yelled out about "silence".

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

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2 posted 2002-11-15 03:28 AM


Indeed, "Where is the caress
Without the word spoken?"

Toerag
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3 posted 2002-11-15 07:34 AM


Nice write....it seems whenever ya want silence...ya can't find it...when ya want to hear that "special" thing....it's like you're deaf....
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4 posted 2002-12-14 03:42 AM


the title drew me in and the words are felt.
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