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Open Poetry #23

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Radrook
Senior Member

since 2002-08-09

Posts 648

0 posted 2002-11-14 05:10 AM

On the bitterest of days
when ravenous death would have its way
an angel of diaphanous wings
plucked strings upon
a harp of gold
comforting my grieving soul
so that I would cease to cry
and instead begin to sing.

Sandpiper
Senior Member

since 2002-06-15

Posts 738
land of flora and fauna

1 posted 2002-11-14 06:02 AM

A soulful write--so full of hope!

"That time was like never, and like always.
So we go there, where nothing is waiting;
we find everything waiting there."
Pablo Neruda

furlong
Member

since 2001-04-08

Posts 129

2 posted 2002-11-14 12:30 PM

"comfrting my greeving

sole"

- this is one of ur best lins i yam lost for words

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2002-11-14 12:42 PM

Radrook, I truly hope that you "cease to cry, and begin to sing".
Very good poem with lots of feeling.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

4 posted 2002-11-14 12:44 PM

Well done, and comforting.

Radrook
Senior Member

since 2002-08-09

Posts 648

5 posted 2002-11-14 01:47 PM

Thanks for the feedback.
Glad you enjoyed.
God bless!

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

6 posted 2002-11-14 04:40 PM

very well done.

M

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

7 posted 2002-11-14 05:12 PM

How could an angel not love this! tehe

This is very comforting...very spiritual...and beautifully written!!!

EA

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