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vandana
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0 posted 2002-11-13 06:38 PM


Let us rise
In the sun
The sun In the sky
The dreams we used to dream
Cast away
Into wind
Cast away into bloom
Let us dream again
Fill our love in hearts
Don't let rain fall on us
And cast away our dreams
to shine
Let us fullfilled our love
And dreams that supppose to shine
Cast away
Don't cast our dreams away
Cast away
all the pain
Let us pray
To let the dreams come true
And fullfilled my heart again
Cast away

[This message has been edited by vandana (11-13-2002 06:38 PM).]

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Magnus
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1 posted 2002-11-13 07:12 PM


Yes Vandana, cast away all those things that
keep you from having or finding love...and
hang on to it once you have it...

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-11-13 07:18 PM




(smiles) And may you only be a castaway in happiness and love forever as you are so deserving of this! (kisson cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, I love the intensity of this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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3 posted 2002-11-13 08:11 PM


Great poem.. Im going to go cast away like your poem told me to... Cya.. lol

I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait.

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4 posted 2002-11-14 07:08 PM


Well your poem certanly cast me away. Has anyone ever told you that you are good at this?

"Sticks and stones will break my bones,
But words will break my heart"

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5 posted 2002-11-14 09:24 PM



Vandana!  This is wonderful!
Thank you for sharing!

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