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Dreaming About Living Without You

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JamesMichael
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Dreaming about
Living Without
You

I awaken and I find
that the woman I adore
doesn't love me anymore.
Why does it always
come to this?
I wager everything
I have and I lose
to loneliness.
Wait a minute.
She just called me.
Seems this was all
just a dream.
A very convincing dream.
But on the phone
she's telling me
that she's crazy
in love with me.
I sure have some
bad dreams.
I hope they never
come true.
I don't even like
dreaming about
living without
you.

JamesLee
November13
2002
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nightmare indeed.... hope they never come true for you either.
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(big huggsssssss) Oh James, that to me too is the worst nightmare possible! (sad sigh) I too hope you forever on dream only happy dreams of being with your love and that it also comes true for you in reality, God Bless You, this is so well-said, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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3 posted 11-13-2002 07:54 PM       View Profile for Connel   Email Connel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Connel

Beautiful poem.. Thank you for sharing.

I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait.

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4 posted 11-14-2002 06:50 PM       View Profile for Wind   Email Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wind

such a sweet poem- i loved this!

"Sticks and stones will break my bones,
But words will break my heart"

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Still, I am glad that it's just a dream and hope it will never come true! Lovely poem!
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good one
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Thank you all for the nice responses...James
 
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