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Dear Sons
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Dear Sons |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Dear Sons If your Mom was in the mood I'm sure she would be more than happy to tell you how I treated her badly. Which should help to explain why she began to clearly see that she would need to break away from a man like me. Now that she's gone tell her I'm proud of her that she made it on her own. Tell her she did a fine job of raising three sons. Will one of you please say some nice words for me to soften up the hurt feelings between your Mom and me. Tell her how proud I am of her. Please tell her that for me. JamesLee November13 2002 ThoughtsFromLongAgo ThatCreptIntoThePresent |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh James, I hope everything is alright, sweet friend, I know how heartbreaking it can be to say goodbye not only to the one you loved but the children too and my heart goes out to all who experience this! (sigh) This is sensitive and heartfelt, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
I hope the thoughts find their way to those who need to hear them... |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
Nice poem. I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait. |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
I didn't understand it... I liked it, but it confused me. "Sticks and stones will break my bones, |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
Bittersweet, from the heart--enjoyed! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
James- maybe your sons could tell her and then hand her this poem. Very touching. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
JamesMichael, this is so touching. I really hope that your sons tell their Mother how you feel, if they haven't already. Thanks for sharing your heart. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This is so sad and touching, James... I hope it works out okay  ~ loving chipmunk hugsLyra |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
JM...Here's to second chances. I wonder how much we'd change of our lives if we could go back and do things again, reorchastrate them knowing how the symphony would end? ~ Ruth |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
JM....those that try, and are sincere... They get a second chance...maybe not in a relationship now over, but certainly in life as a father... It takes courage to see our faults, and to take responsibility for what we have done wrong... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Noah, Cpat, Connel, Wind, Sandpiper, garysgirl, Madame, Hoot Own and Magnus for the nice responses... Wind this is about a divorce that happened many years ago and I felt like no one was taking my side...I always wanted my sons to say nice things to my ex for me...they felt like it was their Moms right to find happiness...James |
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