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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2002-11-13 05:47 PM


Breaking Up and
Getting Back Together

When you break up
and get back together
again it never seems
to be the same.
Love doesn't seem
to be as strong.
This is almost like
a forgone conclusion.
Of course I would love
for someone to prove
me wrong.

JamesLee
November12
2002

[This message has been edited by JamesMichael (11-13-2002 05:47 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-11-13 06:02 PM


oh I don't know James....it could go either way...it depends on their hearts
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2 posted 2002-11-13 07:31 PM




(big huggsssssss) Oh James, I think most of the time that is so very true, but I do believe there are those special times too where getting back together is more magical than ever, when you forgive sincerely and a love can see that sincere twinkle in your eye in tears and make one want to cry too! (sigh) This is wonderfully thoughtful, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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3 posted 2002-11-13 07:49 PM


Very lovely poem.. I Really Enjoyed the read.. Thank you for sharing.

I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait.

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4 posted 2002-11-14 06:48 PM


It's true.. a peice is torn away, and cannot be replaced. Good job-enjoyed this!

"Sticks and stones will break my bones,
But words will break my heart"

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5 posted 2002-11-14 07:19 PM


Oh and how I know this feeling James.
~Hugs~

~Love, like magic, depends on believing~

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6 posted 2002-11-14 07:50 PM


Yes, James, I feel this way, too. It seems like when a couple breaks up they lose part of their trust or something. But, I guess it could go the other way, too....just depends on the couple, I guess.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

Madame Chipmunk
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7 posted 2002-11-14 07:54 PM


Nicely expressed James... but each relationship is unique and I have seen couples break up and get back together again to stay...
~ loving chipmunk hugs

Lyra

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