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poemchick
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0 posted 2002-11-13 05:11 PM


what I like

I like
what we are
I like
what we aren’t
like the similarity of
our differences
your black in my
white
our grey
enjoy the
running of lips and fingertips
together and
apart
I like to touch
as you touch me
I touch you
when we become one
no more or less than
the other
then that is what
I like

"I can write better than anybody who can write faster, and I can write faster than anybody who can write better."
- A. J. Liebling (1904-1963)

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1 posted 2002-11-13 06:01 PM


and I like this....welcome
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2 posted 2002-11-13 07:29 PM




(smiles) This is so lovely, sweet friend, and may true love always fill your heart and your loves heart forever beat in yours! (sigh) This is soooooo romantic, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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3 posted 2002-11-13 08:08 PM


Nice poem.. And welcome to passions.. I didnt see your first post.. But ill look for it.

I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait.

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4 posted 2002-11-14 06:53 PM


Unusul comparisons. I loved the images they created... Good job!

"Sticks and stones will break my bones,
But words will break my heart"

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