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catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

0 posted 2002-11-13 04:46 PM

A mist rose up to stroke my feet
as I walked on down lonely street
An owl called out through the night
as though he understood my plight.

The shadows held me in their arms
strangely I felt no sense of harm
comraderie with all lost souls
seeking for what might make us whole.

The moonight sparkled though the mist
reminding me of his last kiss
A moment passed in other time
where once I dreamt that he was mine.

One solitary lamp still glowed
slowly I turned toward my abode
and walked back to my lonely place
where darkness held me in embrace.

[This message has been edited by catalinamoon (11-13-2002 07:35 PM).]

majnu

Senior Member

since 2002-10-13

Posts 1088
SF Bay Area

1 posted 2002-11-13 04:54 PM

greatly enjoyed. you really painted this with a good mixture of subtle and bold strokes.

-majnu
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Timid thoughts be not afraid. I am a Poet.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

2 posted 2002-11-13 04:55 PM

Vivid portrait of the night sweats.
ThisDiamond

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2002-11-13 04:55 PM

Love this Sandra!
Your muse has returned with a vengence.
~Hugs~

~Love, like magic, depends on believing~

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

4 posted 2002-11-13 05:08 PM

The moonight sparkled though the mist
reminding me of his last kiss
A moment passed in other time
where once I dreamt that he was mine.

Classic Sandra. Nice to read ya, again.

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

5 posted 2002-11-13 05:30 PM

Sandra,

May your future be as bright as your past! Peace to you.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

[This message has been edited by Larry C (11-14-2002 01:57 PM).]

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

6 posted 2002-11-13 06:14 PM

Lonely street....perhaps all cities have
one of these....a very worn path, walked
by many....

Excellent poem Sandra, stop walking that
street~~~

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2002-11-13 06:23 PM

Enjoyed the way you wrote this...James

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

8 posted 2002-11-13 06:25 PM

LIKED IT

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

9 posted 2002-11-13 07:16 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Oh Sandra, my heart goes out to you, sweet friend, I hope everything is alright as I send angel hugs of comfort your way as I know soon all the lights will fill your heart like Paris! (kiss on cheek) This is heartfelt, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

10 posted 2002-11-13 07:55 PM

This is beautiful, Sandra. I am glad to see that your muse has returned.

Connel

Senior Member

since 2002-11-04

Posts 736
Florida, USA

11 posted 2002-11-13 08:07 PM

I really enjoyed your poem.. Thank you for sharing.

I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait.

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

12 posted 2002-11-13 08:15 PM

A beautiful poem, Sandra... Welcome back to you and your muse... It looks like you are back to writing again... and doing it very well, indeed

~ loving chipmunk hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

13 posted 2002-11-13 08:31 PM

Sandra, this is a fabulous poem and brought wonderful visions to my mind.

Thank you, I enjoyed it so much.

Huggles, Marti

"I am not afraid of STORMS for I have learned how to sail my SHIP."
Louisa May Alcott

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

14 posted 2002-11-13 08:45 PM

Lovely write Sandra - enjoyed. Chris

texasrose
Member

since 2001-10-24

Posts 146

15 posted 2002-11-14 10:12 AM

excellent.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

16 posted 2002-11-14 03:41 PM

I enjoyed reading this is the literal sense. I have had such walks.......

EA

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

17 posted 2002-11-14 04:02 PM

a lovely write, Sandra. Here's hoping that the both of us won't be so lonely too much longer

M

MARK V SHELDON
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

18 posted 2002-11-14 05:18 PM

A Gothic stroll though a soul's alleyways...

-MVS

"AS ABOVE SO BELOW"

Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

19 posted 2002-11-14 10:38 PM

catalinamoon...I was just enchanted by this stroll in the misty moonlight of your soul.
WONDERFUL POEM!!! ***Ivy Rose

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

20 posted 2002-11-14 11:09 PM

Aha! You return bearing a gift.

Glad that you've recovered your muse, Sandra.
Been missin' ya 'round here.

Looks like others have as well.

Ed

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