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Amature2
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0 posted 2002-11-13 04:21 PM



Emptiness


There is an

Emptiness in my heart

Something that is constant

Whenever we are apart

[This message has been edited by Amature2 (11-13-2002 04:30 PM).]

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JamesMichael
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1 posted 2002-11-13 06:07 PM


Very nice..James
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2 posted 2002-11-13 07:37 PM




(big hugggsssssss) My heart goes out to you, sweet friend, I know this feeling and hope soon nothing but enlightened love fills your heart! (sigh) I send angel hugs your way, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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3 posted 2002-11-13 07:47 PM


That was short, but beautiful. Thanky you for sharing.

I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait.

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4 posted 2002-11-14 06:47 PM


I love little meaningfull poems like this-good job.

"Sticks and stones will break my bones,
But words will break my heart"

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