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Martie
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0 posted 2002-11-13 02:08 PM


For Love has Come Around
(with gratitude and love to my son, Jay, and grandaughter, Samantha, on her first birthday)

    

Covered with Love

Your baby hands were big even then,
big enough to reach out and touch
the place where love is.

You waved them like wings,
trying to capture the light of dust
that slipped around your curved palm.

You opened something with your tiny fingers,
something invisible, made from heaven’s weave,
then you wrapped me in it
and it gave me grace.

Now, with your big blanket of love,
I see you have found the same fabric,
for you cover her with such tenderness that I weep.

I could never find the words to tell you.

Now you know.
(reposted from 11-13-01)

    

My son
I remember when you were two
you tripped over cracks in the cement
with run-down sneakers
sun-drenched hair
the sea in your eyes

you tossed my heart about your youth
as I sang in dance around the room
with you in curl of whirl

amazed

time ticks to fast forward

to you still gleam of smile in me
to watch the tender hand you give

for as you watch me with your child
you tell me how you see now
how I was with you

    

for Love
has come around again

    


[This message has been edited by Martie (11-13-2002 02:49 PM).]

© Copyright 2002 Martie Odell Ingebretsen - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-11-13 02:10 PM



Already?  She is one, already?  How did you let that happen, Nana?  Weren't you supposed to keep her in cuddling clothes just a little longer?

How well I remember the first day...

How big is your smile now?

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2 posted 2002-11-13 02:21 PM


a proud moment and a proud nana! Congrats to the birthday girl and to you!!!


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3 posted 2002-11-13 02:21 PM




(tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Martie, this is soooooooo beautiful, now you have me crying because Samantha and Jay are sooooooooo beautiful and because you are a loving and wonderful mom and grandmom who these children will always be so happy to have in their hearts! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You All, sweet friend, this deeply touched my heart, we all love you so much, HAPPY 1ST BIRTHDAY SAMANTHA, YAY! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira


[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (11-13-2002 02:22 PM).]

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4 posted 2002-11-13 03:09 PM


You sweet, adorable, precious little Grandma-looking thang you !!

This is a special moment-of-remember ...
Happy One-th Birth-of-Day to little Samantha~

(Yeah, Sis ... and in just three months from this day, My little Delaney will be one !)

God has blessed both our lives ... and I thank him for the beauty of our friendship~
Love you~
~*Marge*~


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5 posted 2002-11-13 03:24 PM


Martie - this is so special and children and grandchildren are so special - you say that specialness so well - it touches me in my dad and grandpa spot!  Loved it - paul
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6 posted 2002-11-13 04:01 PM


Happy birthday, Sam...and what a precious little thing you are.

The stars will shine when I am gone,
the earth will turn on as before,
the gulls, still race along the shore,
the morning star, still kiss the dawn

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7 posted 2002-11-13 04:07 PM


Ah, from one Gramma to another - HUGE HUGS - and Martie I don't know about you but I keep looking at my son in disbelief that he is not my child anymore but someone's Father and Husband, and does it well too.  

Yes Martie, love has truly come around for both you and I, and you certainly share it well from your heart in these words for your son and granddaughter.

Oh my has Sam ever grown, and up on her feet already how cute is that?  Now the trouble starts, and you'll have to watch everything that isn't nailed down.

~* Happy Birthday Samantha *~


Birthday hugs from Natasha and Victoria too!  

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8 posted 2002-11-13 04:17 PM


Gee Martie...I remember the day Samantha was born.
This is wonderful and what a pretty grandma this little doll has!
Happy First Birthday Samantha!!
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

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9 posted 2002-11-13 04:27 PM


Bursting with smile for you dear lady...All the happy birthdays in the world!
ThisDiamond

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10 posted 2002-11-13 04:29 PM


Martie....smiles and congratulations. Bob
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11 posted 2002-11-13 07:16 PM


OK Nana!!!

Would you by any chance be a little biased
about this whole thing....????

Beautiful he is,  they are and you are...

Lovely pics...

Thanx for sharing this moment..

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12 posted 2002-11-13 07:23 PM


Beautiful birthday girlie...beautiful family...beautiful poetry...beautiful poet.

Happy Birthday Samantha...ya got a very cool gramma there!!

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13 posted 2002-11-13 08:14 PM


Enjoyed the way you wrote... Thanks for sharing...

I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait.

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14 posted 2002-11-13 08:22 PM


Beautiful pictures of your beautiful family, Martie...
and with your very special touch of poetry...
Your grandaughter has such a lovely and talented grandma

~ birthday hugs for little Sam and congratulations to you

Lyra

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15 posted 2002-11-14 08:37 PM


well done martie

the poetry and the family
well scripted by you.
cheers

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16 posted 2002-11-14 09:25 PM


Martie, this is just beautiful. I babysat my oldest grandson to-day - he will be three in January, and memories of my daughter - his mommy came flooding back to me as I gazed into his bluest of blue eyes. What a blessing to have grandchildren. All my life's a circle. hugs, Chris

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17 posted 2002-11-14 09:29 PM


Wow! Blessings all around.
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18 posted 2002-11-14 10:44 PM


Oh, I just loved this! It made me feel happy and weepy at the same time! I miss my babies!

Beautiful family! Your handsome son, Jay, is one proud looking daddy!--and you are one equally proud looking grandmother!--and a mighty young looking one at that!

Happy first birthday to your darling Samantha!

Linda

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19 posted 2002-11-14 11:04 PM


good poems, good pictures, great emotives. his hands look so large there, holding your grandchild... it's amazing the responsibility that we have in caring for our children. to be able to see that as love is a gift, truly.

thanks Martie, for always pointing something new out to me with your words.

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20 posted 2002-11-15 12:04 PM


Geez, Martie, WE didn't get any older, how in the world did Sam reach 1 already? What a precious child, and know she has your heart all wrapped up, and how could she not...very gentle smile
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21 posted 2002-11-15 12:23 PM


HAPPY   BIRTHDAY,  LITTLE   SAMANTHA.....

You are a very blessed little girl. The smiles your Daddy and Grandma are wearing certainly shows a lot of love and happiness. I'm sure that you will feel it as you're growing up, too.
I thank your sweet Grandmother for sharing this beautiful poem and pictures with all of us here.

Martie
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22 posted 2002-11-15 01:15 PM


Thank you for celebrating love with me.  I appreciate all the lovely replies.  
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23 posted 2002-11-15 02:26 PM


What goes around comes around and the circle of life continues. Lovely tribute to both your son and his daughter

~ Ruth

If God brings you to it, He will bring you through it.
  
  

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24 posted 2003-10-15 01:36 PM


Marty . . .

You waved them like wings,
trying to capture the light of dust
that slipped around your curved palm

but you found words . . .
what a beautiful family
you are blessed . . .
*smile*
xxoo

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