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Sweetpoet16m4u04
Member

since 2002-11-10

Posts 153
Ma, U.S.A

0 posted 2002-11-13 02:02 PM

The Crush

I have a crush on this girl,
Which in my eyes nothing can even compare.
To me she is the world,
For her to just notice me would be fair.

This crush grows stronger every single day.
Her smile, her moves, her style
Makes my love for her go on for miles.
I’d do anything I could just to have her in my arms to make her feel that everything is okay.

Why can’t I just tell her the way I feel?
This crush could become something more, something special.
Love is such a complicated but meaningful thing,
To capture her heart I’d even buy her a fancy ring.

My crush is different than ever before,
This girl is an angel sent from above
I would do everything and more to treat her right.
So this can’t obviously be a crush no more, it has grown into LOVE!!!

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2002-11-13 03:56 PM

this is very sweet....you should tell her...maybe write a poem for her

majnu

Senior Member

since 2002-10-13

Posts 1088
SF Bay Area

2 posted 2002-11-13 04:51 PM

cute. now do something about it.

-majnu
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Timid thoughts be not afraid. I am a Poet.

Connel

Senior Member

since 2002-11-04

Posts 736
Florida, USA

3 posted 2002-11-13 08:49 PM

Beautiful.

I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait.

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

4 posted 2002-11-13 10:07 PM

I believe these beautiful heartfelt words would be enough to capture any girl's heart. You can't get any more romantic than this.

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Kristine
Member

since 2002-10-30

Posts 92
Mahal Kita!!!

5 posted 2002-11-14 07:26 AM

Thats a very sweet poem... thanks

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

6 posted 2004-01-20 10:48 PM

Did you tell her how you feel? If you havent you should. Maybe in a poem, or something romantic like that!! I would kill to have a guy write a poem like this for me!! lol, not really, i wouldnt actually kill someone!!(I'd hire a hitman!!!) hehe. No, but seriously, you should tell her how you feel, you never know, she might like you too!!!
~kissa~

**~kissa~**
*I wanna be a little more like me, and a little less like YOU!*~ Linkin Park

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