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Open Poetry #23

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Walter Poe
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 787

0 posted 2002-11-13 06:11 AM

i meant to write a poem
i know i did
but i cannot for your gone
and i know only apathy

i meant to write a poem
i know i did
but the words dont come
now your gone

I meant to write a poem
I know i did

Take a good look at my face
Well, don't my smile look out of place
look a little closer its easy to trace
The tracks of my tears

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

1 posted 2002-11-13 09:23 AM

was thinking as I read this, how we as poets measure things by poems wrote, or inspiration lost and found...
as in this case...your regret is felt.
touching write Paul.

No one has ever shown me how to see the world the way I see it now ...
and I never saw blue like that before.

~Tom Kimmel~

Connel

Senior Member

since 2002-11-04

Posts 736
Florida, USA

2 posted 2002-11-13 11:26 AM

you wrote a cool poem.. And i know you did.,. lol... Thanks for sharing.

I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait.

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