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vlraynes
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0 posted 2002-11-13 01:45 AM




~Bovine Reflections~
    
Walking along with me by my side
No better companion...in me I confide
Look at me...graceful...what beautiful stride
I'm a looker that can't be denied

Once I was spending my days in belief
Our souls were as one, but our happiness brief
You left me to pasture, in search of prime beef
Like a steak in my heart, I could find no relief

Why would I want you beside me to share
The mooooods of my life, when you really don't care
You'll listen pretending we'd make a fine pair
Graze on my dignity, stripping me bare

So I'll hoof it alone, crystal waters my friend
I'm all I need...that's the truth in the end
You see, I've 'got milk' so my heart's on the mend
On myself, I will always depend!

~vlraynes



"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

[This message has been edited by vlraynes (11-13-2002 01:55 AM).]

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1 posted 2002-11-13 01:57 AM


*screams* you horrible, horribly, awesomely hysterical person!! LOL I love it Vicky, it just touched me right here *sniff* *looks down and realises she's got her hand on the right side of her chest instead of the left side* I mean, uh, um... it touched my heart *grins*

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2 posted 2002-11-13 01:58 AM


i made the mistake of sipping a drink while i read this.

i now have a bloody mess on my desk because you made me burst out laughing.

this is a keeper!

-majnu
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Kit McCallum
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3 posted 2002-11-13 07:35 AM


Oh, I loved this Vicky!  What a wonderful play on words throughout this piece. You've got me smiling from ear to ear. Beautifully creative ... very much enjoyed!

Best wishes and hugs,
/Kit

Kethry
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4 posted 2002-11-13 07:41 AM


This is so mooving.
Kethry

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5 posted 2002-11-13 11:50 AM




(giggles in delight) Yep, they've got milk and one cow even has Gateway! Moo! LOL! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet firend, I just love your sense of humor, you are a delight to us all, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vicky, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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6 posted 2002-11-13 12:30 PM


Got milk?
This babe looks like she will give you quite a shake...
a milkshake, that is....
Awesomely cute, Vicky
~ moooving hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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