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Earth Never Stops
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Earth Never Stops |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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Earth Never Stops As the wind blows, so passes the season Never a moment to pause and explain Sweeping away the purpose and reason For life’s tribulations and inward pain Not even moons and stars will embrace you Steady their pathways across evening sky Earth never stopsin midst of your sorrow Just spinning the winds as the seasons go by All that I see has a constant motion Birds of the morning keep warbling songs I could not harness sounds of the ocean I cannot find where my sorrow belongs Breezes of autumn have swept on past me Storms of the winter will blow in the snows Seems it is I who must seize the moments Lingering silently next to a rose Elizabeth Santos Nov 13, 2002 |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
As the wind blows, so passes the season Never a moment to pause and explain says so much in these two lines..... very nicely done as always... I enjoyed |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
'... Breezes of autumn have swept on past me Storms of the winter will blow in the snows Seems it is I who must seize the moments Lingering silently next to a rose ...' CARPE DIEM .... a beautifully written piece to go with my morning tea. Huggles dear Liz, Marti |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
How true!! It's entirely up to us to seize the moments...beautifully expressed message, Elizabeth.. ...believe what your heart feels... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"I cannot find where my sorrow belongs" It's nice to know you can always leave some of it in here, where a perennial bed of roses resides. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) As Goethe says, "The right man is the one who seizes the moment!". Carpe Diem!!! Embrace each one of the seasons with a smile and let the breeze and the songbirds and the sun and colors all fill your hearts delight! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Elizabeth, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
"I cannot find where my sorrow belongs" Neither can I, Liz.... I loved this powerful emotive poem  ~ loving chipmunk hugsLyra |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Cpat Hair, Thank you for commenting. It is much appreciated. Glad you enjoyed the poem Marti, Thank you!. Poetry does go well with tes. Scorpio Thank you for your kind remarks Midnightsun. You are right, there are truly friends here who listen, and that is very inspirational Noah, I am truly blessed with friends like you. Thank you, dear Lyra, Oh how you’ve touched my heart You truly understand the phrase Bless you, sweet poetess Liz |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
A lovely and thoughtfull peice. Enjoyed. "Sticks and stones will break my bones, |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very well expressed, Elizabeth. (((HUGS))) |
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