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SEA 
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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Tonight I wear my rain eyes Reflected pools Of love thoughts In shimmer….. Do not disregard the clouds you see Or guess them lined with silver Instead perceive their fullness …know the storm is coming Electric is this touch And your earth alive, anticipating my wet I watch you dance for me In return I cover your sky With grey kiss promises In soft breeze whispers Of torrential ache And with the first hint of rain You know this storm Will rage Until every drop Has fallen, and your earth Completely saturated…….. ~SEA~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Wow, this is sooooooo beautifully sensual, sweet friend, and sometimes salt is all you need to tend a garden as tears of love fall from ones eyes, this is breathtaking, yay, I love it, I'm so happy you're back, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah, my SEA is back... in full storm force... all I had to do was listen for the rain |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
lovely.... "Sticks and stones will break my bones, |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Ah...haven't read you in a looooong time Sea. Course not around much anymore but certainly glad I caught THIS. "...know the storm is coming." Wow, talk about provocative warning.... Enjoyed my friend...much enjoyed. jwesley |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
I enjoyed this meteorological metaphor...well written....the images pour off the page... ...believe what your heart feels... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Of course...Sea is here... and she brought the beautiful warm rain.  Lovely write Susan. ~Hugs~ ~Love, like magic, depends on believing~ |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Beautiful, You do this well. Ed |
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angsana Member
since 2002-11-11
Posts 77 |
Wonderfully awesome...Love it! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Electric is this touch And your earth alive, anticipating my wet I watch you dance for me In return I cover your sky With grey kiss promises In soft breeze whispers Of torrential ache =================================== ahhhh Sea-girlie...Ive always said... youre at your best when youre all wet   lmao And your earth alive, anticipating my wet yowzers!!! lol very very cool poem!!!! No one has ever shown me how to see the world the way I see it now ... |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Susan, Every drop he will anticipate with tender care the parched days are over and healing now begun bursting forth like from spring rains refreshing even in its remembrance Is it any wonder that your poetry of rain is such a consistent source of pleasureable reading. Bless you dear girl, always. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
well, you know how I love the rain--- ..and this JThere is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
SEA~ Ah yes, my friend. It is SO good to read you again. This is absolutely beautiful and reminds me of all that I missed while deprived of your poetry. Great to have you back 'home'. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
I believe I just felt a storm surge. LOL You know your rain well. The stars will shine when I am gone, |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Do I need my umbrella today? So good to see you SEA! |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Sea ..... "Tonight .... I wear my rain eyes." What a wonderful opening. Well done. Bob |
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poemchick New Member
since 2002-11-13
Posts 4 |
i like it "I can write better than anybody who can write faster, and I can write faster than anybody who can write better." |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice Sea...I rode an outrigger canoe on you...James |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
One of your faves and done so very well... (wiping the rain off).... Thanx Sue.. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
you can wear those eyes anytime if they produce things like this.. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Expressive eyes...the mirror to the soul. Really liked this very much. ThisDiamond |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
Lovely poem. Thanks for sharing. I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Do not disregard the clouds you see Or guess them lined with silver Instead perceive their fullness …know the storm is coming No one writes the rain like you do. Nice to read you again Susan. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Noah~ you are such a sweet young man....always dear heart, thank you Sunshine~ thank you, very much for your kind praise Wind~ thanks! JWesley~ glad you stopped in for a read, and thank you Scorpio~ thank you very much Nancy~ it's always raining on the beaches of my heart... Ed~ thank you Angsana~ cool, thanks! Janet~ wet is very good lol thanks butterflyLarry~ thank you for your beautiful reply rain is always meant to heal...Jamie~ thank you so much Vicky~ you are so kind, thank you for that Michael~ you flaunt your storms....I'll flaunt mine Midnitesun~ no umbrellas, just come dance in the rain!! RMW~ thank you PoemChick~ glad you liked it James~ thank you and ????? Vandana~ thanks Magnus~ thanks so much Ron~ I'll remember that Diamond~ I agree, and thank you! Connel~ thanks! Cowboy~ thank you, glad you popped in for a read! |
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