navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #23 » "TWENTY OR LESS...#79"
Open Poetry #23
Post A Reply Post New Topic "TWENTY OR LESS...#79" Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
MARK V SHELDON
Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

0 posted 2002-11-12 08:55 PM


"TWENTY OR LESS...#79"

Copyright 2002 by:MARK V SHELDON


rhythm

pulsing interplay
impelling susurrations
breasted deep
within

slipping

softly
ascending


"AS ABOVE SO BELOW"

© Copyright 2002 Mark V Sheldon - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
1 posted 2002-11-12 08:58 PM


Mark..you have come so far with these!
They are fantastic!
Wish I could keep up...LOL.
~Hugs~

~Love, like magic, depends on believing~

MARK V SHELDON
Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...
2 posted 2002-11-12 09:12 PM


Thank you Nancy  

-MVS

"AS ABOVE SO BELOW"

Mistletoe Angel
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 5 Tours
Member Empyrean
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon
3 posted 2002-11-12 10:17 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is lovely, sweet friend, you have the music and rhythm in you so always let it be recited! (big hugggsssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, you are an original, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Mark, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Cpat Hair
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Patricius
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793

4 posted 2002-11-13 08:28 AM


interesting play on sounds here... I enjoyed

VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon
5 posted 2002-11-13 10:02 AM


ah, the rise and fall of pulse and rhythm

I too like the play with sounds

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

MARK V SHELDON
Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...
6 posted 2002-11-13 11:14 AM


Noah, poetry is music with different notation...

Ron:  sounds for the mind's ears...

Virginia...  as with all the cycles in life...

Thank you all for your thoughts.

-MVS

"AS ABOVE SO BELOW"

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #23 » "TWENTY OR LESS...#79"

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary