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Wind
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0 posted 2002-11-12 08:42 PM



Sunshine is above me,
I let the sun shine down on me.
Fear is behind me,
To slow to catch up with me.
Luck is to my left,
because I'm going to need it.
Fate is to my right,
I will go wherever it takes me.
Destiny is in front of me,
I'm going to catch it before it catches me.

"Sticks and stones will break my bones,
But words will break my heart"

© Copyright 2002 Liz - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-11-12 11:10 PM




(big hugggssssss) Yes, approach the destiny before you for so much promise is in store for you and the sun above you is cheering you on that extra mile! (kiss on cheek) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Liz, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Radrook
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2 posted 2002-11-13 04:43 AM


I liked this poem!
Thanks for sharing.
God bless!

BTW

What is the difference between fate and destiny?

serenity blaze
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3 posted 2002-11-13 04:49 AM


Love the Middle Path theme here...

smiling, try to look happier about it!

(and don't quote me on that...)


Kit McCallum
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4 posted 2002-11-13 07:11 AM


I very much enjoyed the theme in this piece Wind. I liked the way you've surrounded yourself with all the things you need to move forward, and meet your destiny. Very nicely done!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Kethry
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5 posted 2002-11-13 08:00 AM


Are you moving on Wind? It sure sounds like it.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



regards2you
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6 posted 2002-11-13 08:19 AM


I like this a great deal. Sounds like you are in charge and ready to meet and greet all that life has in store.

Warm Regards,
Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

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