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S Arthur Grey
Senior Member

since 2001-03-19

Posts 719
woven by a poet's loom

0 posted 2002-11-12 07:19 PM

the "girls"

they know
with their teasing looks
with their wanton eyes

how do I give it away?
hunger's pale?
bereft's plea?

or do they just smile
thinking themselves kind
to the spent

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-11-12 07:30 PM

(sigh) Wow, this is short yet filled with a seductive twist, sweet friend, girls too can be a mystery yet just knowing they smile is such a beautiful feeling no one can resist, this is fabulous, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

2 posted 2002-11-12 07:34 PM

S Arthur Grey,
I like this descriptive piece although I don't have any answers for you.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Radrook
Senior Member

since 2002-08-09

Posts 648

3 posted 2002-11-13 04:54 AM

Seems that way sometimes doesn't it.
Enjoyed the poem. God bless!

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

4 posted 2002-11-13 11:23 AM

or do they just smile
thinking themselves kind
to the spent

I've asked the same....
but the answers elude me.

Connel

Senior Member

since 2002-11-04

Posts 736
Florida, USA

5 posted 2002-11-13 11:25 AM

Nice poem... But on one will understand women.. Its nature.

I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

6 posted 2002-11-13 11:27 AM

You aren't spent yet, not if they are still looking you in the eye and smiling.
Enjoyed the write, sir.

majnu

Senior Member

since 2002-10-13

Posts 1088
SF Bay Area

7 posted 2002-11-13 01:55 PM

nice. its that way too often.

and connel, have you read any d.h. lawrence?

-majnu
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Timid thoughts be not afraid. I am a Poet.

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