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GOlDsparklESS
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0 posted 2002-11-12 06:50 PM


Presently this forest fills with
Fervent leaves releasing, on a whim,
   Spiral elations
These colors utterly infiltrate
   all around in tandem
With freely falling emotions
    Unfurling ardor
Love is whimsically fast as
   sighs stray far from sight
Sweetly, stars align for this one season
   Spiral elations trail…
    and float on gusty hope
~Softly…following unseen paths~
Chase me to
  Swiftly unruffled reveries of
Glittering leaves aflutter with
   Falling
.
.
.

Oh please, so utterly,
Trail into gusty winds of hope,
Softly...  

© Copyright 2002 Manisha Narang - All Rights Reserved
Sandpiper
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land of flora and fauna
1 posted 2002-11-12 07:01 PM


You pen a lovely scene!
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2002-11-12 07:06 PM


Very very lovely...
Enjoyed so much.
~Hugs~

~Let your heart guide you...
  It whispers so listen closely~

Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2002-11-12 08:08 PM




(sigh) This is so lovely, sweet friend, I love the zephyr of the autumn and you bring the breeze through to us all in these words! (smiles) This is refreshing, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

EagleScorpion
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4 posted 2002-11-12 08:39 PM


hmm.. autumn.. isnt autumn so beeeeutiful?!?! Yay Thanksgivings almost coming!!!!!!!!!!! Woo Hoo!! then christmas then new years yeehah
Very nice write manisha

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5 posted 2002-11-12 08:51 PM


that was gorgeaus my friend!

"Sticks and stones will break my bones,
But words will break my heart"

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