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angel girl
Member

since 1999-07-23

Posts 322
within a whisper...

0 posted 2002-11-12 03:27 PM

Sometimes I feel as though my heart may break
That my chest will open from the searing pain
Of the immense anguish that threatens
To tear my very soul from me.

A pain so sharp, a thousand daggers could not compare
A knife through the heart has no relevance here,
No meaning, for it does not even begin
To describe the pain I feel within.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2002-11-12 03:37 PM

Yikes....

I've had that feeling...

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

2 posted 2002-11-12 03:52 PM

Ouch! This was painful to read.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2002-11-13 05:32 PM

Hope it gets better...James

luvlorn322
Junior Member

since 2002-10-28

Posts 43

4 posted 2002-11-13 06:42 PM

There is probably no greater angst than that of being in pain and the fruitless quest to put to words in such a way that you might be able to seperate yourself from it, for just a moment, to be able to step back and name that intangible nightmare so that you might wake from it. Good luck with yours.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-11-13 08:17 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Oh Liz, my heart goes out to you, sweet friend, I hope now this knife has been taken out from your heart and now the pain has been scalpeled away and comfort now fills you! (sigh) I send angel hugs of sympathy your way, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Liz, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Connel

Senior Member

since 2002-11-04

Posts 736
Florida, USA

6 posted 2002-11-13 08:21 PM

I do know how you feel... Nice poem.

I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait.

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