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JediRaver
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since 2002-08-16
Posts 23
ATL, GA, USA

0 posted 2002-11-12 10:47 AM


Its not easy being a cadet...
being a white male among
one of several hundred
Where is the Individualism
that I once knew so well...?
Replaced with Conformity.....
I rebel against the common goal
and go my own way.....against the grain
I ask myself
"Where remains my own sense of identity
floating in the seas of monotony"?
I need change like I need a winning lottery ticket...
but still I refuse to leave...
and yet
I could go....to the depths of the Amazon
drifting on never ending rivers
or maybe I'd go chill out
on a sunny beached island
somewhere near Jamaica or even in the vast Pacific.
Sippin on Daqueris and playin with the
little umbrellas in those MaiTais...
just thinkin about nothin at all
except maybe that winning lottery ticket
Steel Drums and vox organs keep my rhythm flowing
as clear as a Carribean night
and I stare
getting high on
the light radiating stars

The beat is perfect, so pure
I reach out for another little cigarette
and soak up breezy atmospheres of
sun splashed calming winds
carressing the suntanned shoulders of the
natives.....friendly people!
I am in a far away place that they must call
Heaven
Drifters roam as my own soul
Moving to the harmony that plays on
past the finality of dusk
so I sit back......and smile

But as quickly as my trance began
I found myself sent back
to this battlement that I call home
where there is no soothing ocean winds
to wrap around me close and the beaming
colorful people are once again so far away
now replaced by the same old drab group
I need to breathe as my soul does
when my body can't leave...
Drifting on forever with the island music
that plays on and on and on...

-Jedi

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Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945
Texas, USA
1 posted 2002-11-12 11:25 AM


Sigh. The island music, the ocean breeze, the happy people. The whole dream experience was nice, but face it, if you lived there you'd only think about the bugs and the sunburn.  

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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