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The Thaw of Discontent

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Kit McCallum
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25 posted 11-14-2002 06:40 AM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

Auguste:  Thank you so much for the lovely comment Michael, I'm very grateful.

Poemchick:  I'm glad you enjoyed the lines poemchick, thanks for letting me know.

JamesMichael:  We can only hope spring is just around the corner thank you James.

Connel:  Thanks for letting me know you enjoyed Connel, I very much appreciate it.

Madame Chipmunk:  What a lovely thing to hear Lyra thank you for giving me a smile this morning. I enjoy creating those little smilies too, but there is a much greater sense of satisfaction when a poem is completed. Thank you for such sweet words.

Honeybee:  Thank you so much for this beautiful comment Melissa I truly appreciate your kind words, many thanks.

Balladeer:  The warmth within your comments, would thaw out this old heart any day, sweet poet. Thank you for always bringing such encouragement into my life. Hugs to you.

Bridget Shenachie:  Thank you so much for the kind words Bridget, what a lovely comment to hear, I'm very grateful.

With much appreciation to all,
/Kit
Bridget Shenachie
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26 posted 11-18-2002 10:43 PM       View Profile for Bridget Shenachie   Email Bridget Shenachie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bridget Shenachie

Dear Kit--

Just a note to let you know that this poem impressed me so much that I took it to our writing group to share it with the other members. I did this without asking your permission and I hope that you are not offended. I've never seen a better description of getting through the dark times of life and this poem holds out such hope.  Thank you for the inspiration.

My writing group, The Prairie Inkwells, agreed that this was a truly awesome poem.

Shenachie
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27 posted 11-18-2002 11:10 PM       View Profile for Aenimal   Email Aenimal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aenimal

The bitter struggle between love and apathy. Love will find you soon, if not already. Words like these reveal a soul full of warmth that the tiniest flicker may yet enflame and your anguish abated.
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28 posted 11-18-2002 11:24 PM       View Profile for Lady In White   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lady In White


Ah, the poem has been refreshed...
look wide, our Kit...
with bright eyes...
your muse awaits...
Paul Wilson
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29 posted 11-18-2002 11:36 PM       View Profile for Paul Wilson   Email Paul Wilson   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Paul Wilson

Kit~ A refreshing poem that gives HOPE to all that are in need.Enjoyed very much...Paul
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30 posted 11-19-2002 07:20 AM       View Profile for Rick   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rick's Home Page   View IP for Rick

Dear Kit wonderful writing once again, nice to see one of your postings here, always enjoy your work and thoughts. I look forward to more from you.

Sincerely
Rick
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31 posted 11-19-2002 09:48 AM       View Profile for NewEnglandlazurlu   Email NewEnglandlazurlu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for NewEnglandlazurlu

Kit, somehow this slipped by me when you posted it. I am thankful someone found it and I was able to read and re-read it several times.

I just adore your poems and get so much out of reading them. You are a brilliant writer and with oh so much talent.

I want to say I wish you would post more, but then, I never want anyone here to take your writing for granted.

Thank you again for the privilege of reading your works.  Hugs, Marti
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32 posted 11-19-2002 11:46 AM       View Profile for RSWells   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RSWells

Here's to a recession of the heartless glacier. Enjoyed
Larry C
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33 posted 11-19-2002 07:25 PM       View Profile for Larry C   Email Larry C   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Larry C's Home Page   View IP for Larry C

Kit,
Dear girl you always speak right to my tender broken heart. And with such insight, class and perfect finesse. And on top of all that such a great friend. Life is good when you're in the picture...do it again.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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34 posted 11-19-2002 08:40 PM       View Profile for Gentle Spirit   Email Gentle Spirit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Spirit

Kit, I am so happy that your muse is on the loose and that you have enthralled us with yet another   
So I really don't know what to say, but I would ask of you, Might I keep this?  Extraordinary write Poetess Kit!!


"When we're torn apart,
shattered and scarred,
love has the grace to save us"
Saints and Angels as sung by Sarah Evans

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (11-19-2002 08:42 PM).]

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35 posted 11-19-2002 08:57 PM       View Profile for garysgirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit garysgirl's Home Page   View IP for garysgirl

Kit, I haven't been here but about two months now, so I haven't read your poetry before either.
I can tell that you have a lot of friends here and I can certainly see why. There is so much emotion and feeling in your poem. It is absolutely awesome.
I am looking forward to reading more of your work.
Thank you so much for sharing your talent with us.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

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36 posted 08-05-2005 12:37 AM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

I liked Richard's response, and I say, "here here!"  A thaw is a good thing
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