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Cassie
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since 2002-11-12
Posts 32


0 posted 2002-11-12 12:39 PM



Seeing you just one more time
...To hold you and to be mine

Never let me go
...Encaged in you, forever
...You and me together

Always say you love me too
...And be sure to stay true

You make me feel safe and secure
...With you I am sure

Without you I am lost
...I am tossed to the end
...Till I find you
...And hold you
...And we can be like new
...To never bend
...But to always mend

© Copyright 2002 Cassie - All Rights Reserved
DawnG
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1 posted 2002-11-12 12:47 PM


Cassie,

This is a beautiful first post. I look forward to reading many more. Welcome to Passions. I hope you enjoy it as much as we all do.

                 Dawn

Tammy Blessing
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since 2002-08-26
Posts 366
PA
2 posted 2002-11-12 02:24 AM


Welcome to Passions in Poetry!! And thanks for a wonderful first post Cassie!!
Tammy

garysgirl
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3 posted 2002-11-12 02:32 AM


WELCOME  TO  PASSIONS  IN  POETRY
Cassie..........
I hope that you enjoy it here amongst this
wonderful Family Of Friends. All of us really
do. I really enjoyed your first poem and
am looking forward to reading much more of
your poetry. Again, welcome, Cassie.  

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

Rick
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since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia
4 posted 2002-11-12 07:23 AM


Cassie, welcome to passions, what a great first post you have given us to read, may we often read your work and share together.
This is a great place to meet people with the same interests as yourself, again welcome, don't be a stranger and keep writing, you are sure to get many replies.

Sincerely
Rick

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
5 posted 2002-11-12 08:27 AM


Welcome to Passions!
Please check your email for a special greeting.
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~Let your heart guide you...
  It whispers so listen closely~

scorpio
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since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178
right...there
6 posted 2002-11-12 08:43 AM


...believe what your heart feels...

Sunshine
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7 posted 2002-11-12 09:01 AM



Welcome to Passions, Cassie!  I hope we see more of you in the days to come!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound

Cassie
Junior Member
since 2002-11-12
Posts 32

8 posted 2002-11-12 11:48 AM


Thank you all for all the wonderful feedback, and for making me feel welcome.  I will surely write more poems.  Thank you again.

Mistletoe Angel
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9 posted 2002-11-12 07:23 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwwwww, this is sooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, such love and happiness fills this romantic debut, I love it, yay! Welcome to Passions, sweet Cassie, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Cassie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
10 posted 2002-11-12 09:06 PM


Welcome to PIP Cassie.
Look forward to writing with you.
ThisDiamond

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