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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2002-11-11 09:23 PM


When Michelle
Was Mine

She used to call me up and
say hello in the sweetest voice.
Her voice would soften my heart
until I had no other choice.
I couldn't wait to melt into her
arms in the middle of the day.
I gave her all I could of me
until the day she ran away.
I miss each time
Michelle was
mine.

JamesLee
November07
2002

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Enchantress
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1 posted 2002-11-11 09:31 PM


Ahh sweet James...
Such longing in this piece..
well done
~Hugs~

~Let your heart guide you...
  It whispers so listen closely~

Duncan
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2 posted 2002-11-11 09:32 PM


She used to call me up and
say hello in the sweetest voice.

Still got one of those on the answering machine.  

scorpio
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since 2002-10-02
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right...there
3 posted 2002-11-11 09:33 PM


Such a feeling of loss here...so well expressed...

...believe what your heart feels...

Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2002-11-11 09:46 PM




(big hugggssssss) Oh James, my heart goes out to you, sweet friend, I can understand how hard it must feel to lose someone so special and I send angel hugs of comfort your way! (sigh) My heart goes out to you, sweet friend, we are all here if you need someone to talk to, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

garysgirl
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5 posted 2002-11-12 03:09 AM


OOOOOHHHH, James, this is so sweet. I truly hope that if Michelle can't be yours again that someone else will soon replace the longing in your heart for her. It can happen again, sweet friend.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2002-11-12 05:09 PM


Thank you Enchantress, Duncan, scorpio, Noah and garysgirl for the nice responses...Duncan I wouldn't save her voice on my answering machine due to my present girlfriend...James
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