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Sweetpoet16m4u04
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0 posted 2002-11-11 07:59 PM



I Know…
I know that you and I can never be,
Because that would mean my dreams have become reality.
I know you don’t feel the way that I do,
But having you on my mind makes my skies so blue.

I know its hard showing you how I feel,
But if you can give me a chance I can guarantee they’re real.
I know we will probably end up being just good friends,
But I want much more than that so seeing you will never end.

I still know that after you read this nothing will change,
Even though I yearn for it to happen, I have to survive the pain.
I know my quest for love has to go on,
And I know hopefully it will happen before your gone


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JamesMichael
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1 posted 2002-11-11 09:26 PM


Enjoyed...James
Enchantress
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2 posted 2002-11-11 09:35 PM


Very heartfelt write..
Well done!
~Hugs~

~Let your heart guide you...
  It whispers so listen closely~

Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2002-11-11 09:48 PM




(big hugggsssssss) My heart goes out to you, sweet friend, I can understand these feelings and hope everything is alright! (sad sigh) I wish the best happiness for you on your quest, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

cherrys_rule
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4 posted 2006-11-09 05:11 PM


Hey
Man I'm speechless... I mean I know this was somewhat a long time ago, and I'm not sure you feel for the same person. But This was exactly what I'm going thru. I have like this guy for a very long time now, and i.d.k but We just flirt constantly. I mean I know we are only gonna be friends, but I want to be more then that. I guess it will only take some time for him to realize that. But enough with my love life.

This poem was very good. I personally like the first stanza. I thought that just hit the spot. I hope to see more of your poems. Thanx for sharing.

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