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MARK V SHELDON
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0 posted 2002-11-12 10:16 AM

"TWENTY OR LESS...#78"

Copyright 2002 by:MARK V SHELDON

unclothed

seasons whisper

blowing silky shivers

embracing frosted faces

"AS ABOVE SO BELOW"

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

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1 posted 2002-11-12 10:21 AM

imagery...alliterations.. word play....
so much in so few words...well done poet sir.
good to see ya back in the forums Mark

No one has ever shown me how to see the world the way I see it now ...
and I never saw blue like that before.

~Tom Kimmel~

Magnus

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2 posted 2002-11-12 10:26 AM

I must agree with JM. a nice twist of words, bringing to mind several thoughts.

Cpat Hair

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3 posted 2002-11-12 10:27 AM

to borrow a quote...
as above so below...

I'll echoe the moth here...

MARK V SHELDON
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4 posted 2002-11-12 10:28 AM

Hi Janet!

Thank you kindly for the comments -- it's good to be back.

Barry, I appreciate your feedback and writing. Thank you.

-MVS

"AS ABOVE SO BELOW"

MARK V SHELDON
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5 posted 2002-11-12 10:35 AM

Thank you Ron.

"AS ABOVE SO BELOW"

Midnitesun

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Gaia

6 posted 2002-11-12 11:44 AM

Finally, a chill I can openly embrace.

MARK V SHELDON
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7 posted 2002-11-12 11:49 AM

Embraces should be none other, Kacy...

-MVS

"AS ABOVE SO BELOW"

Mistletoe Angel

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8 posted 2002-11-12 10:36 PM

(smiles) I just love the whispers in your words, sweet friend, they are like the tinsel that polishes every image you portray, this is lovely, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Mark, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

MARK V SHELDON
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9 posted 2002-11-13 10:23 AM

Noah:

-MVS

"AS ABOVE SO BELOW"

VAS
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10 posted 2002-11-14 10:40 AM

fantastic imaging, Mark!!!

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

11 posted 2002-11-14 10:57 AM

naked
the flavor of Wynter's nearness
stirring the flush
welcoming the touch

M
playing with words..

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (11-14-2002 10:59 AM).]

Seymour Tabin
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12 posted 2002-11-14 11:00 AM

MARK,
Well done, enjoyed the read.

MARK V SHELDON
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13 posted 2002-11-14 12:13 PM

Thank you, Virginia...  I keep trying.

Maureen:  There's something
                warming
                in a Wynter chill...

Sy, I appreciate your read and comment.

-MVS

"AS ABOVE SO BELOW"

[This message has been edited by MARK V SHELDON (11-14-2002 12:14 PM).]

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