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ethome
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0 posted 2002-11-11 05:36 AM



The shadows of dusk hide in the young eyes of couriers,
                those creaking young bones drive their engines home
                into their suburb shrines, restore the curse of
                desire and the order of child and their paths cross over
                the path makers and the blankets of lenders
                cover fixed winners. But the crisp glad faces,
                the artists of skilled sleep, their glaring smiles
                filled long with cool and gleaming white,
                walk in green pastures beyond the streets gray lid,
                beyond optics scattered in sheltered wombs,
                in the high towers, where scent nor repose reaches.

                Birds in the Beech trees, singing birds -
                whom no shelter covers, whose small wings wander
                the silvery arms of life, warbling
                sweet zest, melodies that ferry love songs
                to thrill the soul to the inner chambers, the old
                music of the woodland trails and the flight of fall Geese
                that bid adieu the scoured succulent harvest,
                throw their bright voices on the future's restless ears.

                Oh fiber dreamers. Oh concrete toilers
                of the sad cities, messengers trapped in din halls,
                in the uprising throngs of haste with the head
                chiefs drawn faces of sworn allegiance -
                greenwoods call, call from the struggling seeds,
                show me your faces - sleep in my protest tent.

                Under the coins in the wishing well
                a myriad of faces hide, the faces of children
                their love communion
                to lacking ears, isolated time, guilded minds.

                Mother's ghostly justice encircles the savage
                pirates of the perfect emerald belt,
                their blades of steel storming the ancient ridges
                valley to valley, to the great seas, sacred
                seeds, flying gypsies, left crushed on desert floors.
                In the teeming roar brass ears miss the future voices
                in the playground, seeds for whom they kill.

© Copyright 2002 Eric Lewis True - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-11-11 10:58 AM


Under the coins in the wishing well
                a myriad of faces hide, the faces of children
                their love communion
                to lacking ears, isolated time, guilded minds


~*~

Do you realize how easily your words
make me smile?
Perhaps not.  Until now.

Martie
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2 posted 2002-11-11 11:27 AM


Eric

This is fantastic writing, deep and intense...layered with meaning.  I applaud you!

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3 posted 2002-11-11 02:02 PM




(tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Eric, this brought tears to my eyes reading this as I saw it as an urgent message to lend a ear to these myriads of children and learn of their love or an elephant burden will trample us down as we lack the strength of loves understanding! (big hugggssssss) This is powerful, sweet friend, God Bless You, your words are always so powerful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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