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Robert94v6
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since 2002-05-29
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virginia

0 posted 2002-11-11 04:28 AM



I watch you walk away
Into world your not sure of
Fueled by your desires
And carrying my heart
I stand in one place
To shocked to move
And watch the black clouds
That over my head, begin to gloom
I am not sure I know where I’m going
Or how I am going to get there
I feel rain on my head
I am stuck in the moment
Frozen to the ground
Absent of feeling
And I don’t know where I am
It begins to rain harder
And my shoulders bear a heavy weight
I have lost my one and only
In the current of fate
Will you ever come back?
That I don’t know
All I can hope
Is that you think so
Just to see you smile
Baby I love you so much
I’ll be waiting here at home
Longing for your touch
The stars aligned
And life seemed to cease
That day I met you
I was crowned king
For my life was complete
But now I have no queen
I may never be rich
Or have a condo on the beach
For this I am sorry
But I can promise you love
Lots of it for sure
And a little house and some kids
Whether or not you come back
Is something up to you to decide
You know where I’ll be
Where will you reside?
With me I hope
Frat boys and college parties
Are no better than dope
Look inside yourself
At your feelings for me
Tell me there gone
I’ll leave you be
If you find them still there
Please don’t ignore them
Because I have looked and found
Love of unexplainable kind
And I will never let it go



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passing shadows
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1 posted 2002-11-11 05:27 AM


whatever happens, I hope it's best for you. I have felt all this before. And I let it go.
JamesMichael
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2 posted 2002-11-11 09:27 PM


Hope good things happen for you...James
Enchantress
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3 posted 2002-11-11 09:33 PM


Such a sad write Robert.
Hope all will be well soon.
~Hugs~

~Let your heart guide you...
  It whispers so listen closely~

Spiritual Messenger
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since 2002-10-02
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4 posted 2002-11-13 05:49 PM


I too, have experienced this, it is better to let go and try to move forward, In time your broken heart will mend. Just remember one thing, if it is meant for the two of you to be together then it will be written into the good book. I do hope everything works out for the best. God Bless, keep the Faith my friend.
          Cherished Angel

Connel
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5 posted 2002-11-13 08:37 PM


I hope the best for you.. Keep your head up.. Thank you for sharing.

I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait.

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